sick n sadistic right now. feedback intendid

Redid verse 2 and this is what I'm looking at as of now....ha its been a journey but almost there. I'm proud of it

If i could emerge* as the real me*, the sickest sadistic enemy,
An emcee* with frenzied dreams of hysterectomies an vasectomies...
Id swarm like bees when teased n'* carve out knees wit house keys n'*
bleed out sheep ta hear em bleatin,* while farmers plead "please let em be man!!"
No sympathy from me*
so hear my sinister scream let gleem an*
beam of dark greed off the arc'd beams of the barn ceiling. N'*
Mark the scene with caution posts,* in the middle..an esoph-a-gus ex-posed.
Lay a straw-hat by the fallen pro, whose sollum woes we'll never know.
step toe over toe alone down the stoned road onto an awaiting stain n'..
Find a lonely homie at home-he spots me through the window pain n'..
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ceaselessly smash the glass ta pieces, slice and entice a cold grievance.
Stand in peace, over a seamless waste of skin that I tore seams in...
There's a crazed brigade through every vein so I'd do this as a tradition.
If the man had friends then I'd slam heads just ta end it with a submission.
I'm on a mission and non of me's missin the days where I was once normal.
Now done with fishin for thickened ammunition, my mind's friggin immortal.
And when my spine tingles of bordem lord have mercy on backless a**h***s,
Trapped fury lingers so blurry pictures are ravaged like capless tackle.
I fumigate and illuminate backyards to find big dig spots
For luminous places for tombs of faces once widely know as big shots.

Chorus

Sick n sadistic I'm mentally twisted,
verbally gifted and herbally lifted,
I personally think this earth is depicted
In the wrong vision we're afraid ta admit-it.
I'm dead at Christmas while listeners sift-this.
Mister rich-script has somethin to say kids.
I'm sick, sadistic, back off with b**ch hits.
I'm here to rip it....do I gotta list it?

Redid verse #2

I'm the face image for sinners ruthlessly violent.
Create visage for pillagers uselessly virulent.
Take evil to a level unrivalled by kindness,
And pin lethal people like I'm cutting a fine dress.
I cast darker shadows than medievel gallows at sunset.
Make martyrs of foul folk, the rest best left unsaid.
Play dice games on steeples wreck cathedrals like porn sets...
Rep still, cuz no one strong enough to stop me's been born yet.
I'm sick as Ebola virus with dementia and Alzheimer's...
A Schizophrenic Oppenheimer missing all-his-incisors.
Evil enters like a needle and spreads like an oaktree. quote me.
I enter longtip'd and spread dope. look closely.
"The scale of evil is in everyone but the notes, yet seldom heard"
Sopahcles you didn't know this bird, a Mozart to the word, u heard?
I fule cruel brutal brigades for uprisings and taking,
breathtakingly dangerous when I see composure breaking.
I'm tasting vacant dark forces, and pushing darker performance...
I'm a dark horse with coarse force ta kill off the mormons' course

(Chorus..)
(3rd an final verse....)