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    Here we go again. Here's another pissed off song of mine. I wrote this one right after a fairly physical confrontation with my dad. A little fun fact: most of the songs that you read of mine are about my dad. From that, you can kinda tell that we don't exactly have the best relationship in the world. He is the whole reason I've really started writing music. So, here you go. Enjoy.

    Crying for help
    But nobody saves me.
    Left in the dark,
    So blind that I can't see.
    I realize you think
    That I'm a mistake,
    Considering all of the
    Chances you take.
    See, what you are saying
    Is nothing that's new.
    I've heard it before,
    Having dealt with you.

    Chorus:
    Exiled from a
    Life that's lost!
    I'm tearing my skin
    In the pain that you caused.
    You've carved a wound
    That won't be healed
    Unless you f*** up
    In the fate that you sealed.

    Seeing the fact
    That you won't control me
    Opens the path
    To my eternity.
    The damage that's done
    Isn't all that was made.
    There's plenty of scars
    That just will not fade.
    Now you're all alone,
    Now you're out in the cold.
    You're crumbling in fear
    From this deadly hold.

    Binge your soul,
    Take it in.
    Purge the truth,
    Lie within!

    Chorus

    You're nowhere.
    You're nothing.
    You're fading.
    You're drowning.
    You've grown in
    To your spell.
    You've fallen
    To your hell!

    Chorus
    Last edited by Sewn Up; 07-11-2006 at 02:20 PM.

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    Wow, you're pretty pissed off at him aren't you???I think it's pretty cool,don't know much about metal (I take it you're into the harder stuff) lyrics, but I think it's cool.Can really feel the anger!

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    hey there dude yah my band is trying to find awsome lyrics for are cd and your song lyrics would be perfict for are band so i was woddering if we could use your lyrics could we plz cause are lyrics are going down the drane...far far down the drane

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    Default hey

    hey am liking those lyrics the structures good, was gonna ask when you write do you create scenarios in your mind to write with?



    Quote Originally Posted by Sewn Up
    Here we go again. Here's another pissed off song of mine. I wrote this one right after a fairly physical confrontation with my dad. A little fun fact: most of the songs that you read of mine are about my dad. From that, you can kinda tell that we don't exactly have the best relationship in the world. He is the whole reason I've really started writing music. So, here you go. Enjoy.

    Crying for help
    But nobody saves me.
    Left in the dark,
    So blind that I can't see.
    I realize you think
    That I'm a mistake,
    Considering all of the
    Chances you take.
    See, what you are saying
    Is nothing that's new.
    I've heard it before,
    Having dealt with you.

    Chorus:
    Exiled from a
    Life that's lost!
    I'm tearing my skin
    In the pain that you caused.
    You've carved a wound
    That won't be healed
    Unless you f*** up
    In the fate that you sealed.

    Seeing the fact
    That you won't control me
    Opens the path
    To my eternity.
    The damage that's done
    Isn't all that was made.
    There's plenty of scars
    That just will not fade.
    Now you're all alone,
    Now you're out in the cold.
    You're crumbling in fear
    From this deadly hold.

    Binge your soul,
    Take it in.
    Purge the truth,
    Lie within!

    Chorus

    You're nowhere.
    You're nothing.
    You're fading.
    You're drowning.
    You've grown in
    To your spell.
    You've fallen
    To your hell!

    Chorus

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