new song... Fireflies

you're tantalized, sexified
when i'm with you, you lift me high
butterflies, every time
you light me up
my firefly
you are the moon
you are the sky
you make me care, you make me try
there's just one thing
is you don't know me, you don't know me, you don't know me
no you don't know me
don't know me

you're dreamin big
my caramel
spin me round, carousel
we'll never hurt
the perfect lie
love you more, til the day i die
never fuss, never fight
eternalized, when we die
perfect girl, love you so
only one thing you didn't know
is you don't know me, you don't know me, you don't know me
no you don't know me
don't know me

The thing with this is, I really like it but it doesn't look like a rap to me ?

I see what you mean.. try. Doubling your lines up for each bar....
and Add some fillers...pretty good though...needs work.