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smooththug get hit wit a hot slug throw up a lung
imma gangsta blood beat yo azz leave ya rattlted n rung
im tired of ya flows put u out like a fire
take out like dat dude from the wire
yea im one one rollin like a tire
rollin off a pill no i dnt steal bi*ch i kill
ak leave u wett like a seal
smooththug cant spit for real
smooththug a neva get a deal
ask ya girl how my D1ck feel
last night i had her rollin of dat pill
smooththug kno im supa ill
stop ur rappin light a blunt n chill
stop ur rappin light a blunt n pop a pill
stop ur rappin or im comin to kill
u cant see me u r like stevie
i wonder y u try n battle me
knowin ur outcome is defeat
ur rhymes soft like bed sheets
im done wit u homie
B LEE light my stogy
i take a puff n blow n ya face
bi*ch dis my building n u aint alowed in my place
yo Bi*ch hop on my rocket she headed to space
yo girl puzzy wet n i love how it taste
tell her get puzzy ready im comin for a taste
i win dis battle ni99a 1st place

How is this a "battle"? We ain't clashin heads.
Beating you is no hastle - ask your 'head'...
Wither its grasping 'members' - or pens,
You pummel yourself...
An you know exactly what that meant.

Im filled with potent txt - an Ill flip yours like a read page.
Get red with rage as killer rhymes accumulate.
Your minuscule man, a joke with iller taste.
I've more ways to to say it, but your decline says it best 'j'

Learning where you stand is a pressing issue these days,
Let's just say 'bud' youre in the "I can't rap" stage.
Bro id be amazed if you took my script and related..
id be more inclined to give you my best as I stated.

im done lol good battle tho smooththug yo rhymes is nice i could use a good lyricst like to to write for my brother im not a rapper myself im sure it showed lol

Haha thanks dawg, nah you got some punch lines. U could develope that

thanks i try lol maybe bein on here will help

Sbu guess its down to you and me
Here to lay you down lyrically
Violently sleeping restlessly
Compliantly spitting tastelessly
Shamefully taking a raged beating
Watch the show we will begin seating
Fire out my mouth, eye sockets bleeding
Wannabe rapper, pockets still needing
Heeding no warnings going in head first
Your just another rookie, here to "quench" -- my - "thirst"
Walkin out on red carpet, your leavin -- in a herse
Chillin' back now, waitin' for your verse.

Y'all don't know me but, I'm Down To Spit
Every one here got that same flow - Counterfeit
Y'all like prostitutes, choke but proud of it
You pricks are more whipped than a coke powder bit**
Suckas say they from the street but I'm still doubtin' it
15 Years old my style burns hotter than a thousand spliffs

'Spliffs burn' at my lips but, I spin cold flips.
15 year old kid, you're better off knowing this...
Proclaimed lyracists often try that kind of spit,
But when ripped, perseverance decides to die quick.

There ain't no 'counterfeit' unless you want me to 'buy' your script..
Ill take your sh*t bars and design something proportionate.
It's unfortunate but, of course kid there's no remorse in this.
'piss-poor' attitude over gratitude is your worst 'miss'

Gotta say you got a point, but here there ain't no war,
No one even knows what it is they're fightin' for,
Hiding in the dark when they're knockin' on your door,
Drugged out and aching, lying, stretched out on the floor,
Ain't got no respect, ain't got a penny, ain't alive,
Gotta drag you off the streets or else you won't survive,
You ain't brave, you're a slave, to the society that gave,
Us no way to live each day, now you're heading to your grave

(haha, felt like joining in. You can ignore me if you likes :P )

yo yo yo
i spit more bars that.....i don't know.hey ya'll, what spit's bars?

I dunno. Mozart?

I'm takin a break guys. Good battle!

Go ahead and group into packs, lil groupie *** rats. Just like treflats, need to learn cheese from a trap b4 u step to da Mack. To learn where u lack next time just ask. Got my inbox going mad w/"ah crap!"s and " oh snap!'s and requests to friend add. So I add u, then I made u. Now you're gonna make me take u, to the back to, smack u, slap u, stab u. Drag u, like u was a black dude and i was two white fools, from jasper and way too prideful. The whole time just mad, both being fags, too scared to hold their sacs, kiss and realize the true love they coulda had. Did u even just get that? I said I was two faggets. I rape any n***a I rap at. But ROBB loves MACK. Im from way back. Like slangin crack in da streets, **** that like cardboard and droppin to beats. You cant rob the robb w/2 Bs. But big ups! Smoothtung and Rus. Mgibs and nostik, still i wish, to know what to rhyme your name with. Ill bring u fame kids, and I don't even wanna be famous, just poke your raps anus. Its haneous to claim this, you're insane, yes. I'm insanest. Exchange this to be painless. But go ahead get off to my pain, cuz I just wouldn't be the same w/out that pressure on my brain. Hemorrhaging, swelling from remembeing sins ive sinned and am surely bound to sin again. Truer words never been sworn. Soon as I wake up in da morn bong rips ready to be torn. If I don't smoke beware be warned u could get talked about when my pens out whoring. And I'm pimping from home writing my song. And I can go on and on and on, for eternity, forever for so ******g long, til the shows over never hearing a gong, After the credits stay going strong.

Originally Posted by Katie13

Gotta say you got a point, but here there ain't no war,
No one even knows what it is they're fightin' for,
Hiding in the dark when they're knockin' on your door,
Drugged out and aching, lying, stretched out on the floor,
Ain't got no respect, ain't got a penny, ain't alive,
Gotta drag you off the streets or else you won't survive,
You ain't brave, you're a slave, to the society that gave,
Us no way to live each day, now you're heading to your grave

(haha, felt like joining in. You can ignore me if you likes :P )

Fam, welcome! that was a bland effort.. rap better..
it's just innuendo if I dig katie's 'grand entrance'.
you don't sound proud you sound bad-tempered.
if I "ain't got a penny".. I'll pound that cents'less.

I do feel bad that you're such easy fodder. please-keep-on-though..
or "head" to your "grave" like it's sleepy-hollow.

"no war" here, what we're "fighting for"s all peace;
respect for the art shines like sparks when the swords meet.
"heading to the grave"? but we all are, it's what life's-about...
I'm satisfied to rhyme-for-now, and treat each like the final-bout.

Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard

Anybody wanna' start it up ? . . . .

Originally Posted by VerifiedSpit

yo yo yo
i spit more bars that.....i don't know.hey ya'll, what spit's bars?

A Xanax pez dispenser

Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard

Anybody wanna' start it up ? . . . .

Originally Posted by ROBBMACK

A Xanax pez dispenser

A Hooker sukn Xanax di*k

Originally Posted by _Nostik_Go_Hard

Anybody wanna' start it up ? . . . .

Originally Posted by VerifiedSpit

yo yo yo
i spit more bars that.....i don't know.hey ya'll, what spit's bars?

A locked up ni**a who's cellie just put his face thru the door
The doors are actually steel bars hence "spit bars"
After a lawyers final test the computer that grades it spits out "bar" exams
Baseball players spit "bar"leaf
When I was little if I cussed I'd be spitting "bars" of soap
I even think I've seen lil Wayne spitting "bar" when he speaks

(Bar: lean, drank, syrup, codeine)

Originally Posted by VerifiedSpit

yo yo yo
i spit more bars that.....i don't know.hey ya'll, what spit's bars?

Originally Posted by ROBBMACK

A locked up ni**a who's cellie just put his face thru the door
The doors are actually steel bars hence "spit bars"
After a lawyers final test the computer that grades it spits out "bar" exams
Baseball players spit "bar"leaf
When I was little if I cussed I'd be spitting "bars" of soap
I even think I've seen lil Wayne spitting "bar" when he speaks

(Bar: lean, drank, syrup, codeine)

Robb.. you're the blandest-rapper.
I forge hot bars like blacksmith's-hammers.
I write bars like 'bards', infact..
after that.. you should be 'barred' from rap.
you soullessly "spit bars" like vending machines.
you 'spit baaas' like the rest of the sheep.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Sbu guess its down to you and me
Here to lay you down lyrically
Violently sleeping restlessly
Compliantly spitting tastelessly
Shamefully taking a raged beating
Watch the show we will begin seating
Fire out my mouth, eye sockets bleeding
Wannabe rapper, pockets still needing
Heeding no warnings going in head first
Your just another rookie, here to "quench" -- my - "thirst"
Walkin out on red carpet, your leavin -- in a herse
Chillin' back now, waitin' for your verse.

..Tyler's so dumb that he doesn't know when he's-defeated.
My skill with lyrics killed him, "fire out my mouth" as ill as sneezing-pheonix.
"pockets still needing"? ..I aint rich but work hard to play hard so I make it through.
it's crass to make cash from rap. I'm payin' dues.
man.. you really think that the topic-embarrassed-me?
I'm putting out tracks with all profits-to-charity.
I'm a "wannabe rapper"? ..it seems-you're-a-parody.
..All I wannabe's free-from-the-categories.

@ RobbMack

Im prayin' for you n*gga, I put that on myself you see,-
Better get improvin', before you makin' rhymes of 'me'. . .
I got the 'guns' loaded -'Don't think you want a "clip"
Don't read my words with focus, or you'll bust your lip. .
You a'ready know, there ai-n't stoppin' me,
Don't think that your' lil raps will put me in defeat'. . .
So hopefully that this has helped thee',
Comeback with a better script and Ill dealt with 'he'