Ahaha woord venomonology.. good sh!t bro, we got sh!t on tho by that b!tch hah
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aha, yeah man - damn scat dyk
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Alright kids I hate to break up this little as* kissin' session
But the professor just walked in, it's time start your lesson
First off puttin' a buncha rhymin' syllables in a row with no emotion no substance and no flow
Just sh*t that rhymes has no meaning and no soul
Doesn't really mean sh*t so just let that sh*t go
Oh...
Look lemme show you a little example
I f*cked Cheesy's moms til her nipples were ample
Believe I'm on some sippin that dank bro
Shot a two, sprained my dang ankle, unfaithful angels
With short haircuts and bad tangles that smelt worse than f*ckin bojangles
Mangled, house with no shangles, flow un-taint-ful holier saint-full
Metholody with no apology and kill MC's ruthlessly leave 'em toothless see
In the booth it's me un-foolishly killin fools dropped like tools, I rules..
You get my point? I hit from odd angles
It's painful - all you talk about is killin' but the only thing dead's your damn imagination
Bracin - for whatever attacks next son
Lemme hear some words that you poured your heart into
That ain't just rap but art and smart sh*t too
Lemme hear your damn pain and frustration at this whole rap game
The fact and fiction too mixed
Come and put yourself in this b*tch and add some skill to the mix
'Fore I pull my damn hair out and snitch
On the rap police cuz hopelessly
There's too much hype and not enough soul (ya see)
Too much writin' 'n' not enough flow
I should give up but won't let this one go
Too much fightin' but don't no one know
Who wins or loses any damn battle
Cuz everyone comes back after each attack
Just to write a rap about the fact that they think they're better
Till I guess you get wet up don't know when to let up
Truth is I could give a f*ck less if I win or lose
I just wanna read some sh*t that hits me through my damn screen hard enough to leave a damn bruise
So look I won't even make my last two lines rhyme
Either put up some real sh*t or get off the ****in forum -
man this is a rap battle, the need for soul is much less
the only place for heart's the floor when I rip from chests
you f*cked my mom? so what, every n!ggas had a go on the wh*re lots
like a video game freak the way she's lettin fagg*ts play with her x-box
and that's from the 'sole', cuz ages ago I learned that 'lesson'
I'm the only 'one' that 'counts', while my fam's stuck on basic 'math questions'
if you wanna know my frustration go read my quick key, it's an open thread
I fixed the b!tch up years ago, and still she literally f*cks for eggs and bread
better off dead, like you and anyone else who ever steps to me
I got no hesistation while you contemplatin whether or not you want to shoot ceesHip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Instead of "..to me" an "shoot cees" inquire the whole ending phrase..
Like, "to me" should be thought of as "step to me"... If u make that sound like one word ou can see how other phrases an words sound better to rhyme with, Like 'destiny', 'arrested me', steadily etc.. -
I just say that because you ended with 'shoot cees' with a long 'shoot' which means emphasis on the shoot, but the set up rhyme was 'step to me' in this phrase the word 'step' is long and 'to' is normal, a light word in cadence.. so basically what I'm saying is know which words are long, and how to rhyme them an when
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iight, thanks man. most of the time I quick key without thinkin too much which is why I flip between dope and wack so often. gonna start tryin to spend time on my verses tho. kinda difficult when I only get about 3 or 4 hours down time a day... and pretty much all of that goes up in smoke... get me?
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
you don't know "flow", you're cold as snow,
Originally Posted by quickill
if there's any hope of floe shown 'in-u-its' frozen though.
you can't kick it. "*ss kissing"? sick.. his sh*t is forced.
the kid is 'flawed' like rimming dwarves.
bringing concentrated beef like a stockcube. what dude, not true?
you "mixed fact with fiction" ..your 'con'fused'.
you're always either lying or exaggerating Quickill.
your 'sales'll fail like dilapidated windmills'.
I'm Quicker and Iller, it's some utter disrespect..
'til 'Quickill' wishes it was 'Suddeninfantdeath'.
this tip's going over your head like I'm damocles..
f*ck "the rap police", they just ain't catchin' me.
hating on you is an act of philanthropy..
like robbin' your hood just to give it to charity.
this 'art's in my "heart" so I'm 'beating' you naturally.
I love this sh*t.. but when you rap the passion leaves.
I don't care if you doubt the wit. in actual fact I'm proud of it.
don't even 'Goe-the're.. you sold out "soul" like faustus did.
you ain't "saintful", that's silly.
leave "Faith.full" like Biggie.
it's not 'wholly' "holy", more 'holey' than Cheese' is. believe it.
your long raps stank like you don't want to breathe in.
you've got concepts but can't express them properly. strive for better quality.
word is born.. like etymology.
he didn't rhyme his last lines.. as if that's original..
he's dissing my "b*tch" but 'Miss'matched the syllables.Last edited by _SBU; 02-17-2012 at 12:36 PM.
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damn n!gga... you on fire lately
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
I see clearly, seems like you need 2 real'eyes
opened wide while force feed'in others lines
nothin nice, bite'in bits like rhymin sharks
and if you miss, don't expect us to widen marks
these blades're sharper cut like Judas tongues
no surprise who's crucified way a Jew'does when I'm done.
f*ck this battle, 'Quick'will' never be favourite to 'scribe' wins
cuz the way his reads'volve-like-a-door he'll leave the way he 'sign'd in.Last edited by CheesyBacon; 02-18-2012 at 12:08 PM.
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Back from my trip ill be back tomorra
