Rip It (Battle) *Available to join*

Anybody wanna' start it up ? . . . .

I rip rappers so bad lyrically, it aint even funny
Im the definition of overkill in the dictionary
Spit fire through the wire like im speaking incendiary
You made a mistake, coming here to battle me

^Sorry its only 4 bars, too tired to write more atm

Y'all wanna rip it ? Zip it, this chick is in the building
I shxt hits, get big flicks but bxtch I'm still chillin'
Saybers ain't killin', he's just fillin' us with hate
I'm drillin' these kids, are u still willin' to debate ?

4 bars it is. . .

Ima' rip it, nd' zip it, give it to ya' in a baq,
Ill make it befit, youll' split it with Saybers, I won't even naq. . .
You say your drillin' kids, now don't qet edqie with me,
Are there any bids ? Before I anqle this sh*t with deqree

aint a ***** alive who can fu-k with LO,they know im strapped up like velcro
u all sayin different **** with different faces,talkin about how u rip i will rip ya pages
cuz yall is paper and im some scissors,i will rap it up and then deliver
i got a frosty flow,and so u get the shivers
did i kill u?,cry me a river

(sh*tty stuff) But, I ain't tripping.

"u all sayin different ****" we're ambitious,
Want our sh*t to be repetitious ? with same lyrics on every line,
Usinq metaphors all the time ?
Your silly, I act childish. . But really Im one of the wild-est. . .
Since 96', still younq, writinq rhymes that are unsunq, with klicks,
You, your lines nd' kicks, qive me the need to affix. . .

I needa' prove who I really am, a cold harded' spitter who dont qive a damn,
Bout' a b*tch or hater, showinq I dont care, to cater,
Jus' keep hatin' you'll qet me famous,
You'll jus' be thinkinq your not iqnoramus.

metaphorical? really. i can go in i can go deep
with ya lullaby raps hope i dont fall asleep
i follow my dreams that means im a stalker
i got the recipe for success from betty crocker
u think im silly? well arent we all
callin me ignoramous thats a lot of talk for a neanderthal
keep talkin road runna i am wile E. coyote
came in the rap game and they should promote me
im not standin at the crossroad between rags and riches
im standin between givin up and being ambitious
its funny how the flyest of them all come crashin
and the fame dont last long like the marrige of kim kardashian
but dont get me wrong no im not a hater
im more of an instigator

yup, you are ambitious. tho im vigorously viscous.
a passionate tactician with missions repetitious.
its almost Christmas...list this on your wish list;
"crispness on thick scripts to leave grimaces on witness' "
instigator? good.. stepped up from instant hater or imitator,
that's an indicator to progress and be an innovator.
call me a vindicator for thrilled skills and will that kills
im trill to the day i day, the mac slapped my rap tranquil

Talkin bout ya christmas list
I got a hit list
Im a lyricist im fearless
Valley of the shadow of death
I make yearly visits
It was exquisite
To bad u missed it
U got sick rhymes i can give u praise
But i dont hate never brang somebody down
That i never helped to raise
See im the rose from the concrete
Ive been placed in a vase
As for fame i would just like a taste
And i hope its sweet
I will never taste defeat
last night i ordered some victory
With barbeque sauce that hickory
My skills, im either metaphorical or personal
But in the end im just professional

^ that one was mine i forgot to sign in

eh i dont hate either bro haha...its a compliment if i battle you. means u got good s**t. i'll come back at ya when i come on later

i didnt say u hated me i said i dont hate nobody

Originally Posted by Unregistered

Talkin bout ya christmas list
I got a hit list
Im a lyricist im fearless
Valley of the shadow of death
I make yearly visits
It was exquisite
To bad u missed it
U got sick rhymes i can give u praise
But i dont hate never brang somebody down
That i never helped to raise
See im the rose from the concrete
Ive been placed in a vase
As for fame i would just like a taste
And i hope its sweet
I will never taste defeat
last night i ordered some victory
With barbeque sauce that hickory
My skills, im either metaphorical or personal
But in the end im just professional

You say your vased, a rose from the concrete
Your offbeat and conceited...with Me u can't compete
Look. Step up your game, I'm all madden; level insane
While I'm rapping your blappin bout fame, why mang?
Ur untamed an stained not yet ready to be framed,
Tho its not u I blame, just refrain dont be ashamed.
Just engrain into Ur brain "not ready to bring pain....
Sorta feigned and plain" do u write with a cain?
Ur rap isn't much, just a crutch dude....pretty lame

Madden? Please my game is that NBA,i guess im kinda cocky but its in my DNA
but dont be playin games this is a tournament,sayin im conceited but i give to the less fortunate
but really tho im not tryna get famous,this beef is more of an angus
u see im fresher than that prince from Bel air,and if im on crutches ur on wheelchairs
but u got my respect,im the Smooth criminal ur just a suspect

I "suspect" your subject in retrospect is disrespectful...
Smooth is this dude. Not ta dis you but-Ur-fretful.
Forgetful...I'm the one giving u a chance curry
To expand in flurries and get sick like the scurvy.
Your "NBA"? I'm the Kentucky Derby...the grounds of riches
Im sturdy so listen, you can't bring me down with-this
I rep "wheelchairs" for just stitches pushed by *****es...yup.
Spit elsewhere, its a game of inches n Ur too big for Ur briches pup

alright i give up ive been beatin

Dawg errthing I said was in battle terms. U got potential so if u like ta spit an write work at it. I ain't Trya run you off...more like push you ta get better. Ur decent bro

Against /smoothtung/ 4 bars

This is not the time or the proper engagement
and this be in your head while im making my statement
step back
cause i be rushing like a bull ox
I be heated up
eventhough im in a cool box

and thats an oxymoron
check yo damxn dictionary

even a fag need education/ I recommend William Carey

(inside info- William Carey is an university for females dominate)

Yo come at smooth you betta come a me, sh1t,
with disrespectin' me you can expect a vasectomy
correction "B/Be" You born from broke protection see,
man either way born a b1tch and die one too
next time your ma should be stiched up and thrown in a zoo.
@Tackpic_47
Btw, no disrespect to your momma man, just battlin son.

notes
correction "B/Be"- he said "i be" alot
protections see, man- see, man/seamen

Originally Posted by tackpic_47

Against /smoothtung/ 4 bars

This is not the time or the proper engagement
and this be in your head while im making my statement
step back
cause i be rushing like a bull ox
I be heated up
eventhough im in a cool box

and thats an oxymoron
check yo damxn dictionary

even a fag need education/ I recommend William Carey

(inside info- William Carey is an university for females dominate)

Is that with a response? Come with better than that Dawg