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  1. HomeGrownProduction's Avatar

    HomeGrownProduction said:

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    Sorry for taking a bit. Worked last couple days

    Yo , SBU and shadoow
    Think you know everything but I'm still asking where' rap go
    Style that I "grew" ; minimal effort but you can't have all that , No!
    Nothing bout ya mothafuc!as is new go back to where ya came from be'fo.

    Ay you Mr.Rambo and Shadow

    I'll give you that got some crazy rhymes
    Still yo **** don't phase me cause I've seen hundred's of your kind
    Both of you little bi!tches didn't wanna face me cause I got a maniac mind
    Think you can spit it but of the latest all your **** together can't fu!k with one line!

    This motha fuc!a says practices skills till you feel born with em'
    I run this sh!t when I RAP IT and everyone I know gotta to adore it
    When you rapping all of em whisperin' "Man this n!igga so horrible"
    Stop with all dat' cause 30 sec's I'm yawnin ; Boredum! :[

    But haha don't take this to offense
    You can't flow **** and you "sluggin" no temple.
    Yo shadoow when you can stop ed!ting I'll respect yo' sh!t
    Freestyle is respected for real , Put you aside with all the rest yo' *** a b!tch!

    SBU say's Yo , Stop forcing it man!
    Fuc! you when yo **** nothing but boredum land :////
    Tried ta fu!k with me now try thinking twice when ya can
    You both rap egotistical but damn let's really see who's last to stand
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    Yea, I have crazy rhymes... if the boot fits wear it full..
    this kid thinks his lazy lines can beat me? Hysterical.

    He's got to be kidding ..rhymes words twice wickedly.
    And listen, "..I like girls".. so.. why you tryna wink at me?

    I've read what you said.. 'fake' spreads fast "sooo..."
    Regain who you are - while your brain stem's intact yo.

    You're a whole lotta nothing, with a whole lotta bluffs.. yeut..
    And it seems you're shuffling through more 'trash' than dump trucks.

    Dumb luck, you've started a stiff 'beef' with the master,
    Numb n*ts scripts for weeks, I come so much faster..

    This one is no rapper, he just loves fighting 'shaad'..
    But when its done watch him stagger like he's been siphoning gas.
    Last edited by smoothtung; 01-18-2012 at 08:54 PM.
  3. sincere134 said:

    Default spit at haters

    call me mass murderer terrorist
    im here to here to end this bullshit
    scarface is here tommy guns ***** full clip
    suck these bullet like how u suck on your *** clit
    im going hard at u b*tches like a viagra ****
    so u haters know ur f*cked like a trick in a porno flick
    im here to battle any one of u douche bag and im choosing random
    i aint no pu*sy so nothing can protect you hater no condom
    where is the throne im here to take my kingdom
    here to rule the block solomons wisdom
    this just a preview how im fuc*ing you b*tches im not done yet pre cum
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    Yo sincere134, take a seat... let me spit this:

    sincere, oh sincerely I dearly love
    how you think it's good to battle just by talkin guns and sayin f*ck.
    yeah, your clearly stuck on level one
    when you spit sh*t even deaf kids wanna buy ear plugs.

    so I don't need no condom? no problem
    I never wash my feet with my socks on.
    and what's all this about "it's just a preview"? "pre-cum"?
    umm... put your hands up if you think that's weird... YUP!

    If you wanna talk movies? I know I'm the chieftain.
    You're just an amateur director - I'm Tarantino, Quentin.
    I pulp your fictions one by one by dissidence of diction
    I'm a dog from the resevoir on a mission.

    "here to rule the block solomons wisdom" um...
    exactly which kind of sense you making?
    I just can't figure it, maybe I'm missing it
    Please explain to me your meaning, maybe I'm the idiot.
    But I doubt that, 'cause based on the rest of the rap
    Your just wack. Now let this be your life's f*cking soundtrack.

    shaadow, you next.
    Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-19-2012 at 02:26 AM.
  5. CheesyBacon said:

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    Shaadow - an imperfect imitation or copy.
    A rough image caused by opaque objects. Got me?

    An archetype of weakness in Jungian psychology,
    You exhibit this regularly, I think you need therapy.

    "rhymes words twice wickedly"?
    wickedly my wicked words rhyme twice. twice.
    see? I could have rhymed it thrice.

    But I prefer concise, twice was suffice.
    This be a little slice so nice,
    Just enough that your enticed to reply.
  6. smoothtung's Avatar

    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by CheesyBacon View Post
    Yo sincere134, take a seat... let me spit this:

    sincere, oh sincerely I dearly love
    how you think it's good to battle just by talkin guns and sayin f*ck.
    yeah, your clearly stuck on level one
    when you spit sh*t even deaf kids wanna buy ear plugs.

    so I don't need no condom? no problem
    I never wash my feet with my socks on.
    and what's all this about "it's just a preview"? "pre-cum"?
    umm... put your hands up if you think that's weird... YUP!

    If you wanna talk movies? I know I'm the chieftain.
    You're just an amateur director - I'm Tarantino, Quentin.
    I pulp your fictions one by one by dissidence of diction
    I'm a dog from the resevoir on a mission.

    "here to rule the block solomons wisdom" um...
    exactly which kind of sense you making?
    I just can't figure it, maybe I'm missing it
    Please explain to me your meaning, maybe I'm the idiot.
    But I doubt that, 'cause based on the rest of the rap
    Your just wack. Now let this be your life's f*cking soundtrack.

    shaadow, you next.
    That was.. funny an' fly.. - but 'productions' is easy;
    want me? I'd bleed you dry - don't give a f*ck who see's me.

    You need me, my fire lines burn so steezy / sly,
    "My fire lines.." well yea.. will 'burn' you to 'cheesy-fries'..
    You're a 'reservoir dog'? Well I should drown this puppy,
    respect me 'dawg' ..
    How dare you think you're repertoire's above me..

    You've disastrous word-play; Tarantino, Quentin..? Listen..
    You're classic mishap - like a pair of Kilo's pending shipment..
    Last edited by smoothtung; 01-19-2012 at 08:45 AM.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by CheesyBacon View Post
    Shaadow - an imperfect imitation or copy.
    A rough image caused by opaque objects. Got me?

    An archetype of weakness in Jungian psychology,
    You exhibit this regularly, I think you need therapy.

    "rhymes words twice wickedly"?
    wickedly my wicked words rhyme twice. twice.
    see? I could have rhymed it thrice.

    But I prefer concise, twice was suffice.
    This be a little slice so nice,
    Just enough that your enticed to reply.

    He's run out of steam - ..can't cook a punch
    Over'ran' his mouth so here's a foot to munch..

    I'm 'shaadow'.. - ..so always on the 'dark side' of light,
    You're stacked lines are shallow even if rhymed 'thrice'.

    I'm serving 'high and tight' so step back from my fire dawg..
    The difference between us dying in fight.. you've higher odds..

    You couldn't bring something tight if your were a vital communicant,
    And you couldn't 'come clean' if using lysol for lubricant.
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    smoothtung said:

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    You're obnoxious. All the lyrics I wrote there were spontaneous to the moment and there was no copying.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Please step back.. - ..you can't see me?.. You dont want to.
    You refuse to respect that what you see from me might haunt you.

    You can't rap.. but 'tweak' fast.. Must be 'crack' pursuance ..like thongs dude..
    I didn't steal lines, but if stealing is 'influence'.. we're all screwed.

    I'd assault you,
    ..but you too tempt behind glass screens..
    I'd maul you but I'm content - ..won't wreck the chaps dreams..

    I can't tell if you're acting, no matter.. sir's a fun liar..
    You came at me, but actually swerved into gun fire.
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  11. killanatural said:

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    I got more heart than bret not spiritually
    but in my basement from the MC's i stab lyrically
    lethal minded as i walk binded with the microphone cord
    I do this for fun to you its a chore
    watching you scream is my reward as you get torned
    the only time im letting you get away is to leave you mentally scarred like a 5 year old doing kitty porn
    but when you hear the horns you know scorn apporaches
    microphone fibroses my prognosis is that ill survive more wars than roaches
    cuz i get loose when i shove my **** up you cunts
    your stunts are not cute trying to smoke *****s up like a blunt
    on a mean manhunt like columbine but like them tips your lines are hollow
    get a new rapper for your tounge to swallow
    or get a new style for your mind to follow
    rite now you aint **** thinking you are legit
    mastered the art of mimickry and now you throwing fits
    fvk all of that just put the mic down and just quit
    Last edited by killanatural; 01-19-2012 at 05:00 PM.
  12. smoothtung's Avatar

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    Quote Originally Posted by killanatural View Post
    I got more heart than bret not spiritually
    but in my basement from the MC's i stab lyrically
    lethal minded as i walk binded with the microphone cord
    I do this for fun to you its a chore
    watching you scream is my reward as you get torned
    the only time im letting you get away is to leave you mentally scarred like a 5 year old doing kitty porn
    but when you hear the horns you know scorn apporaches
    microphone fibroses my prognosis is that ill survive more wars than roaches
    cuz i get loose when i shove my **** up you cunts
    your stunts are not cute trying to smoke *****s up like a blunt
    on a mean manhunt like columbine but like them tips your lines are hollow
    get a new rapper for your tounge to swallow
    or get a new style for your mind to follow
    rite now you aint **** thinking you are legit
    mastered the art of mimickry and now you throwing fits
    fvk all of that just put the mic down and just quit
    Killanatural's still not actually 'killa'.. but confused a bit.
    He's still a ..back-ta-school, half-as-cool.. math geek with a crucifix.

    Lose the sh*t..
    ..It's guna take more violence to stop me..
    An if you can't 'kill-naturally'.. well I tend to get raunchy.

    I'm only dropping 3 bars to this 'hittin hard hustler'..
    Though you know I got more 'bars' than 'linkin-log' structures..
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    He's "fly" and you say I'm easy?
    Yo style on how ya rhyme don't please me

    I'm gonna take you're flow right out your mouth
    Let this "rap" forum know I'm the light to show where shadoow is about

    Think you got mo' bars then "linkin' log structures?"
    Damn bro you ain't so hard when I'm carryin' mo then Freakin' log truckers!

    But once again told ya, Don't **** with OneLuv
    Own ya in your own style you think you holdin' ; Tough luck
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    MY shadow flashes past, you stand back. Gasp. Can't grasp what I say like I'm speaking Arawak.
    Your wisecracks ain't all that, they fall flat. Your off track like a plane that's been hijacked.
    Your soundtracks are so slack, they can't hack it, like a gambling addict losing at blackjack.
    I'm a linebacker, you're a quarterback fumbling a bad snap then getting your *** sacked.

    This is target practice. Come on man, think of something original.
    Cause me a miracle. I want you to, I just don't think you got it in you.
    You think I never heard that "cheesy-fries" sh*t before?
    Only on every forum that I've ever been posting, like you gotta be joking.

    That's the best sh*t you can come up with?
    Your lack of effort is offensive, come on, try it again b*tch.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    My Production's-outGrown-Home, your still living with your parents
    But that's a better situation than these shaadowy vagrants.

    You say his rhyme style is not the most pleasing,
    He says you're easy cuz yo style'o rhyme's not appealing.
    Believe it. I'm fly, you fall painfully shy of such heights
    So kiss my *** and I will leave you with pinkeye.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    This Cheezybacon guy still says I'm with my parents?
    You so basic you ain't got the skill to speak with confidence : Straight arrogance

    Ain't none of us afraid of any heights
    In real life ; You'a guy who just bums ****!ing rides

    Touch my mic ; Back !uck up before you can't ask why.
    Kiss *** and get pinkeye? You stuck in 90's style and mine goes farther then the fuc!ing nile!

    You ain't fly for **** when you rhymin' like a 9 year old white kid
    Bet you a Buck40 5'9 b!tch who talk's abuncha bullsh!t so he can fit right in
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    Shaadow says he's "serving high and tight", seems more like you both left high and dry.
    I don't need to try, just spit sh*t off my dome to leave you stranded, hypnotized.
    I'm not confined to just one style, like a pro ho who knows mo' than one way to make you smile.
    All the while you desire that you 2too could run these miles and not be tired
    I'm like the Great Wall of China, b*tches! F*ck the nile.

    "Basic"? Says the guy forced to comment on races.
    Racist! Naw, just kidding. But I am little scared your fiddling!
    Talking bout "real life", "9 year old kids" and "bum rides".
    Think twice before you post your wack rhymes next time.
    Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-20-2012 at 03:34 AM.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    haha.
  19. CheesyBacon said:

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    ok, there you go.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by HomeGrownProduction View Post
    He's "fly" and you say I'm easy?
    Yo style on how ya rhyme don't please me

    I'm gonna take you're flow right out your mouth
    Let this "rap" forum know I'm the light to show where shadoow is about

    Think you got mo' bars then "linkin' log structures?"
    Damn bro you ain't so hard when I'm carryin' mo then Freakin' log truckers!

    But once again told ya, Don't **** with OneLuv
    Own ya in your own style you think you holdin' ; Tough luck
    aha bro headin to work right now but ill come at ya after.
    Also u diss my style but ur adopting it bruv lol