Love unleashed elements (not finished) leave some feedbacks

Hi everybody, I just wanted to share a verse i wrote, and i wanted to know if it was good or not, so if you could give me some feeds, it will be helpful


(verse1)
I fell in love with you and your real eyes,
but i realized that you were just a real lie,
You killed me in real life, with a real knife,
Too much pride, for you it's too easy to hide,
Too easy to fly high, to kiss the bright lights,
I loved you... But you take the first flight,
When you start a fight, you clash the sky,
Then stars fell down in the rest of the night,
It's my soul that you bite, my heart that you tight,
You're a f***ing nasty b***h pliant soft and slight,
And I'm the fool you loved, and transformed in ice,
Love at first sight, here's the tornado, there's a strife.


(verse2)
Here is the tempest, I can see the time pass,
Launched in the contest, i rewind the past time,
Love make you feel fill in, I'm on my prime time,
Drunk of your feelings, Yes i saw the light shine,
Now that you're missing, I can't see the finish line,
Never seen the other side, I'm stuck but never mind,
The wall is too high to climb, but I hope that i'll be fine.
I just can't decide, I need some air let's get a ride,