Well...hello everyone, my name is Paul and I'm from the UK... I recently wrote a love song for my Girlfriend, and wanted to know what everybody thought as I'll be singing this in my band...

So here it is:



The first time


I stand on the edge of the world,
Thinking of you,
I wake up with a smile on my face,
After dreaming of you

Everytime I hold you in my arms,
Everytime I kiss your lips,
I get a feeling in my heart,
Telling me what I allready know,
Everytime I hold you in my arms,
Everytime I kiss your lips,
I thank god that you…

You came into my life,
Showing me what love is,
And I knew that this was right,
Even from the first time,
You’re my shinning star,
My angel my paradise,
And I’ve felt this way so long,
Even from the first time,
The first time

You’re the only one who makes me,
Feel like you do,
I would walk a million miles,
Just to see you,

Everytime I hold you in my arms,
Everytime I kiss your lips,
I get a feeling in my heart,
Telling me what I allready know,
Everytime I hold you in my arms,
Everytime I kiss your lips,
I thank god that you…

You came into my life,
Showing me what love is,
And I knew that this was right,
Even from the first time,
You’re my shinning star,
My angel my paradise,
And I’ve felt this way so long,
Even from the first time,
The first time

I knew that we were meant to be,
Even though you’d only just met me,
And I know that we’ll be together forever,
Nothing can stop the way I feel…
You came into my life,
Showing me what love is,
And I knew that this was right,
Even from the first time,
You’re my shinning star,
My angel my paradise,
And I’ve felt this way so long,
Even from the first time,

You came into my life,
Showing me what love is,
And I knew that this was right,
Even from the first time,
You’re my shinning star,
My angel my paradise,
And I’ve felt this way so long,
Even from the first time,

You came into my life,
Showing me what love is,
And I knew that this was right,
Even from the first time,
You’re my shinning star,
My angel my paradise,
And I’ve felt this way so long,
Even from the first time,
The first time

What do you all think?