Some quick bars I made in 10 minutes.

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  1. ir1 said:

    Default Some quick bars I made in 10 minutes.

    I did this in class. Criticism and advice is appreciated.



    In cad class, spit mad fast to make time pass
    My rhyme gas's potentially flammable. An animal
    with different flavors like Danimals. Eat other emcees
    and then see i'm a cannibal. They're only fractional
    cause againts me they'd be irrational. An actual
    emcee would be more practical but i'll be me and
    Just be more radical and factual cause these other
    emcees are malleable.

    I know subject matter is lacking but it was sort of off the dome and just messing around. Parts you liked and criticism is appreciated.
  2. Tyler6270 said:

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    I like it man, a lot. Especially while in class and in that short amount of time. Keep at it = )
  3. ir1 said:

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    I just realized how many times I used the word emcee.

    Oh and thanks.