New song in the making plz read

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  1. Matt6660 said:

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    This is a new song I'm working on. I come up with some good lyrics around 12am for some Reason. I like to hear feedback before I finish the lyrics. Plz comment




    Leave me here to be*
    Leave me here to be what your not
    Something inside me want to forget
    What you are*
    What you are!

    But how to see
    All the things*
    We will never see
    What they turn to be
    everything your not
    Everything your not
     
  2. Aidanr14 said:

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    Quick question. How long have you been writing songs? It could be improved. Not meaning to put you down my friend
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    I just started writing not to long ago.
     
  4. Matt6660 said:

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    This is a beginning of a lyric that came to me around 12am.