calling you out

I'm a straight up guy so I won't be sly Ill be direct.
you claim to be best n' - Ive a title to contest.
You think you bring an essence with your presence that can't be messed with.
Ive a confession I'm unimpressed by your progression, time to be tested.

Youre a "'S' tandard 'B' ase 'U' nit"- it's 'S' ensitive 'B' ut 'U' nclassified'.
Still putting in ur '2-cents' but tragically past prime.

I'm fly like Sbu corsairs with a 'S' special 'B' oarding 'U' nits
And I've seen the best of your 'warfare'. If you've more to bring prove it.

Originally Posted by smoothtung

I'm a straight up guy so I won't be sly Ill be direct.
you claim to be best n' - Ive a title to contest.
You think you bring an essence with your presence that can't be messed with.
Ive a confession I'm unimpressed by your progression, time to be tested.

Youre a "'S' tandard 'B' ase 'U' nit"- it's 'S' ensitive 'B' ut 'U' nclassified'.
Still putting in ur '2-cents' but tragically past prime.

I'm fly like Sbu corsairs with a 'S' special 'B' oarding 'U' nits
And I've seen the best of your 'warfare'. If you've more to bring prove it.

that name sucks.. man wait up..
you chose "Smooth Tung" coz you lack 'taste buds'.

you just come with some dumb-writtens, trust-me.
your judgements are proving you're unfit-to judge-these.

I stay on top and keep it ill. you're the forum's weakest still.
you tried to diss my lyrics but you're dissing your own reading skills.
and your comprehension.
yes I've got a "presence".
your talent's so 'medium' you need a 'ghost writer'.
or be 'ghost' and leave; you're perceived as so spineless.
"time' to be tested"? ..try using retrospect.
tryna "call out" SBU? ..you'd better 'call out' SOS.

we all see you try-to-bite-me.
can't match that with minor-rhymeschemes.
you're not high-and-mighty.
you aint "fly",-you're-flighty.
you've scrappy-doo attitude. you're an amateur dawg.
My "presence' can't be messed with" coz I'm w/rapping the bomb.
you truely believe that you're something important?
if it's "warfare", I've "more-to bring".. I 'bring mortars'.

'Scrappy-doo attitude'? - 'fact I'm badly due gratitude...
I've masterful aptitude with 'half as used' magnitude.

You are destitute, actually -
Inaptly proved and sadly fooled.
you say you stay on 'top' of a chatroom. Cool.


You've not seen my best - yet are content in contesting.
My 'pro'gression's ascending while still yours is pending...
You are 'con'descending and, ending that is tempting.
You are meant to bring 'standard'. not 'script' 'standard' pretending.

I'm not defending my spine -
Let 'writtens' in passed time speak for me.
I project enchanting rhymes to blow your mind like c-4 heat.
When eyes and txt meet, dawg.. - you might think you c-4 of these..
What I throw I land clean, an bring with, pristine authority

that's not fresh. back off, friend.
your text's a con and lacks context.
you're not-yet a veteran.. try to rhyme relevance, resident replicant.
carbon copies only turn to diamond when I pressure-them.

war's not a game and real soldiers don't respawn.
keep your "c4" .. my sound-waves break with the 'sea for'ce.
what do you 'see for'? -I snuffed out your torchlight.
you couldn't 'see' me even if you tried to use 'fore'sight.
that's proof to refute that I'm 'past prime' lyricist.
but all your "raps in past time".. primitive.
and you ain't even bringing it old-school.
If you think you've sick drops then you're trippin' on toadstools.

Hold up dawg,
you've so much wrong -
I 're-spawnd' in relevance
to show eloquence involved.

I've yet-to-be solved. - so Ill decline your input.
Im known to reflexively ride 'waves' like drift-wood.

I'm 'bright' like UV's n' - you and me, we forge sword sparks.
But in time you will see - I've embarked to course more heart.
I'm just doing my part,
Learning the art in means to master...
It may be hard but ill start in parts
that make or break a rapper.

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Hold up dawg,
you've so much wrong -
I 're-spawnd' in relevance
to show eloquence involved.

I've yet-to-be solved. - so Ill decline your input.
Im known to reflexively ride 'waves' like drift-wood.

I'm 'bright' like UV's n' - you and me, we forge sword sparks.
But in time you will see - I've embarked to course more heart.
I'm just doing my part,
Learning the art in means to master...
It may be hard but ill start in parts
that make or break a rapper.

you're not quite spineless like some vertibrae-are-loose.
I'm "heart"less but livin' like I'm terminator-two.

either make a solemn oath not to boast, or drop some flows that honour those.
you forecast "sword sparks" but you're armed with bokkens though.
I should've warned that wooden swords cant spar with my sharp wit.
...you're 'under'dog' but 'sh*t' so it's not an advantage.

you keep bringing in similar sh*t.. I'm sicker and this 'scripts a symptom of it.
if you're fly with wax dropping you're on icarus wings.
you're very skewed. depressed and resenting my deadly moves. send me dues.
take -"UV n"- flip it.. but still nobody'd -en'Vy You-.

Dawg u got my 'dues',
but I'm not ready to lose.
ill rock a haiku...

'Heartless'? Why, I too..
I might do things despite you.
Thy let less shine through...

You are closed off and in bad taste to show off. this 'round' you play poorest.
You've a dirty slate, and if 'on top' will 'gun' your term-in-'8'-or less.

Your pace is best when facing cats who supply the ammo themselves.
I face the 'best' - I hate anything less and you bet I bend back "shells'

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Dawg u got my 'dues',
but I'm not ready to lose.
ill rock a haiku...

'Heartless'? Why, I too..
I might do things despite you.
Thy let less shine through...

You are closed off and in bad taste to show off. this 'round' you play poorest.
You've a dirty slate, and if 'on top' will 'gun' your term-in-'8'-or less.

Your pace is best when facing cats who supply the ammo themselves.
I face the 'best' - I hate anything less and you bet I bend back "shells'

I'm not "closed off", you know I've shown props so stop the crap.
If I'm 'closed off' I'm your roadblock so the "show's off".. 'drop the act'.
if you're dissing my flip style you don't know relevance.
I'm a catalyst-and battlewinner, I show both elements.

rhymes bind like neutrons.
I approve of lines you dropped.
"haiku"? ..high-ku'dos.

you've made a quest to "face the best".. take your strengths, display and better them.
a graceful way to end to a playfully 'hateful' thread; ..you're a major threat and latent veteran.

I admit that may have 'nik'd' a nerve - but off the 'spur' of the moment.
It was a bit absurd an that I concur - of course I will certainly own it.
You are my strongest opponent with many components to your so-honed scripts.
I in turn, postpone this show of wit and in dabs, extend a closed fist.

Smoothtung> Whole Forum.

Dawg
Smoothtung = flattered (minus) that top spot..