5 min job, start of my new rap, take a read

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  1. shaunfoz said: 12-07-2011 06:10 AM

    Default 5 min job, start of my new rap, take a read

    i need the spark to set the ignition
    to become the rap industrys number one emission
    like co2 i make ya choke-
    up on stage-
    make ya broke
    i fight to the top and i aint gonna stop
    compared to me you aint got any hope
    no chance of recovery
    your in a lyrical trap
    my words are wizardry

    this verse is complete
    lets call it a rap

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    tackpic_47 said: 12-13-2011 10:24 AM

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    mmm...

    for some reason...i feel like you like you use this line often
    "this verse is complete lets call it a rap"...

    call me a jerk...but imma let people know how i feel...take it in any kinda way..criticism equals to change or resentment!
    Last edited by Mixalopoulos; 12-14-2011 at 01:04 PM.
    Rhymes-fade....Only the fans bring them back to life!

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    Deleterious said: 12-13-2011 10:30 AM

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    to short need longer lines and more lines also make it more understanding