I was listening to the song 'T.I.- Im Back' I just thought of writing this freestyle I thought of. Its kinda similar but, I just had some inspiration with the flow and sound.
Rack they brain, N*ggas showing pure malice,
I don't have to do damage, Ill jus' show em' that Im savage. . .
Now you could, should maybe would,
Show me how 'hard' you can be, or how you are 'so hood'
I know you good, enough to see if your fake or not,
But, enough info is known for how fake you got, recently
You've been hating for the stuff that I got, I bought,
This sh*t I own now, is mine 'somehow'
If your disapointing me, just bow 'down'
Im coming even harder, than "Tha Carter"
I didn't know what you meant by freestyle, wither u spit it then wrote it or just wrote it without editing so I just gave myself 3 minutes to write this, no editing. What u see here is a writing freestyle
I got, rhymes supplied -
like words in Webster's...
Verses so damn 'fly' - they ride your receptors.
we might collide guy,
but I'm your protecter.
To size you to 'tight' - I'm on your tries like a sweatshirt.
Inspector..
finds - what you devise just ain't workin,
My festered kind's, up in your mind like a brain surgeon.
I hate lurkin...
Below the hype of what is heard.
So ill 'fly' with punches -
...yea I'm the toughest bird.
Pup you're absurd - the worst version of 'new ta this'
You spit without substance - an ill 'new-ta' this
Last edited by smoothtung; 12-19-2011 at 06:42 AM.
Reason: aight so i edited the last line just now. haha sorry had to