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smoothtung said:
12-28-2011 02:26 PM
francis
Francis was a teenage genius, aloof an nerdy
He didn’t likesports, or getting his hands dirty
To hide from the bullieshewould getto schoolearly
He had a speech imped – Imped - impediment, he communicated poorly
All thejocks were jealous of his academic accomplishments
All thegirlsshunned him, they were sexually opposites
They would always ask him questions likethey werethegreat philosophist
All theanswersled to Francis lacking any and all confidence
One day after a particularly ruthless hazing
Francis was in his lab, mad, eyes blazing
He said he would fashion a robot to eliminate the hate that they were raising
He gave it super strength and speed, with a titanium alloy casing
After two weeks his robot was ready for his bitter dealings
He programmed it to eliminate all those who ever hurt his feelings
The robot entered school and destroyed every human from the basement to the ceilings
The task was complete…..but there was a flaw in its logic……
When the robot saw francis after its job was complete
It grabbed Francis and separated the ground from his feet
Francis gasped for air, but alas, his trachea was crushed
Francis lay on the ground dead, his robot stood motionless, ready to turn to rust.
See one thing Francis had forgot when programming
Was that his own mind, was likealltheothers,and yet even more damning
As much as the jocks and girls hated francis, francis hated francis the most
So Francis died a tragic way, and if one was looking for irony, then this is butter for that toast.
ir1 said:
12-28-2011 02:39 PM
It's text but honestly I couldn't find the flow on this. More internals would have been better I think. Keep it up though you have some good rhymes.
smoothtung said:
12-28-2011 02:51 PM
dawg i wrote this alooong time ago. Before I wrote 'sick n' sadistic' ~ both versions.
Just never had anyone look at it. Haha I write a lot better than this ^^ now