Untitled - my best lyrics to date. Please read, give feedback.

One verse and chorus off the top of my head. I think this is by far the best stuff I've come up with and I think it has a lot of potential.

V1

Governments cause all these wars, they're nothing but some corporate wh*res who think laws have a backdoor.
And the public ignores it, it's f*cking appauling, how we fall for it easy like dropped jaws.
We're drawn to the cause out of ignorance, forced to support our forces abroad
Cuz they got balls to go to a foreigners country, Kill fathers, rape daughters then bring home a bounty
Like natural resources, man I hate all this, I wish I never pledged allegiance to this land of hypocracy.
It's not a democracy, it's f*cking bureaucracy, so come on n*ggas - who's gonna follow me?

Chorus

Pick up your arms, today we'll make a stand
Together we march in the name of our homeland.
We'll raise up our voices for freedom,
With numbers behind us we'll beat them.

Really like how clear your lyrics are...

this is good check out mine if you want

Good meaning. Ron Paul 2012. ;]