have to write 33 - 40 lines and diss 12 'cees

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    smoothtung said:

    Default have to write 33 - 40 lines and diss 12 'cees

    I'm in this comp and have to diss everyone in it. It's like a royal rumble wrestling match, but with freestyling.

    Here are the contestants and what I've wrote so far, HELP me out please dawgs


    Hoard
    ...TheMunster
    Destroyer
    Deon
    Beyond
    Quis
    Ctrl+F5
    Alphabet.
    AllenKnight aka mag.
    Swerve
    Dolla
    Defiant

    I'm wrapping up this 'royal rumble' - catch me on the top rope,
    I'm out to cause them trouble.. like a bundle of false dope..
    Stop. nope. These punks meet a ..greater 'destroyer'..
    They 'score' not ..but dream like they're ..'laker' embroiders..
    Their fake.. like lawyers..
    ...so dawn absurd - but fun lyers.
    Some attire.. ~
    ..boy, these 'birds' 'swerved' into gun fire..
    I'm tons 'flyer' - ..what they devise, ..just ain't workin..
    With some 'fire' - I'm ..'all up in their minds'.. like a brain surgeon'.
    Their game's worsening..
    but... - yes.. - ..I mend failures..
    I love the game.. and all these cee's lined up to 'rail' her.
    The 'rap game'..
    you make the whole enterprise seem depressed..
    You're 'of the past'.. no matter if you cntrl+f5 n' refresh..
    You've weak text..
    ...you can't write. - But.. try hard as hell..
    You're 'die-hard's but.. will ..'die hard'ly felt.
    Thy cards are dealt.. - you've bit styles and flaunt it?
    you 'biters' are 'trippin'. ..like there's acid in the piranha pit..
    munster, how'd land on the roster?.. you obviously can't handle me..
    .. such a bland imposter - the 'Munsters' I know are .. comedy/fantasy..
    And, please.. ..'deon'? I'm eons 'beyond' his banter..
    don't read this wrong, but I'll 'D' ..'on' like I'm deion sanders.
    I'm a neon lantern, glowing; "hola!", stand tall on streets..
    An if rhymes are potent, for 'Dolla' make you 'all-OD'
  2. CheesyBacon said:

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    How about something like -

    I make the 'alphabet' sweat, never knows how I'ma use it
    I rip it apart to put rhymes together, almost like I abuse it
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Thanked dawg I actually took that line for awhile but changed it in last minute re-writes/edits
    This is what I came up with.


    I'm wrapping up this 'royal rumble' - catch me on the top rope,
    I'm out to cause them trouble.. like a bundle of false dope..
    It's time they grow some sense and meet a ..greater 'destroyer'..
    They 'score' not ..but dream like they're..'laker' embroiders..
    They're fake.. likelawyers.. - ...so dawn absurd- but fun lyers.
    Some attire.. ~ ..boy, these 'birds' 'swerved' into gun fire.
    I'm tons 'flyer' - ..what they devise, ..just ain't workin..
    With some 'fire' - I'm ..'all up in their minds'.. like a brain surgeon'.
    Theirgame's worsening.. Ashaming their names with failures..
    I love the game.. and all these cee's lined up to 'rail' her.
    You've weak text.. ...you can't write. - But.. try hard as hell..
    You're 'die-hard's but.. - will ..'die hard'ly felt.
    Thy cards are dealt.. - you've bit styles and flaunt it?
    you 'biters' are 'trippin'. ..likethere's acid in the piranha pit..
    An munster, how'd land on the roster?.. you obviously can't handle me..
    .. such a blandimposter - the 'Munsters' I know are .. comedy/fantasy..
    The rap game.. you make the whole enterprise seem depressed,
    You're 'of the past'.. no matter if you 'cntrl+f5' n' refresh..
    And, please.. ..'deon'? I'm eons'beyond' his banter..
    don't read this wrong, but I'll 'D' ..'on' like I'm deion sanders.
    I'm a neon lantern, glowing; "hola!", stand tall on streets..
    An if rhymes are potent ill serve for 'Dolla' make you 'all-OD'
    No one follows me. I'm last and that's the I way I like.
    'Alphabet's only alphabet cuz we use his *** when we write.
    Hoarder, you've ran dry - I've more words than hoarders..
    Talk is cheap but if so, you still aren't worth a quarter. '
    ak' what are you, a 'knight' with some firearms?
    I'll take you to the 'dark' ages an off you with spire shards.
    AllenKnight couldn't come tight if a vital communicant,
    And he couldn't 'come clean' if using lysol for lubricant.
    Honestly.. ..myscripts'defiant'- I'm a lyricist.
    my punhes'll leave you fine men sideways and delirious.
  4. CheesyBacon said:

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    yeah that's better man. i knew my lines weren't good enough, just hoped they'd spark something in you.
    Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.