feedback starting verse of this song i want to write?

Darkness crawls through my cerebelum
as im tortured with the voices of gold and redrum
I am possesed by seeds of the devils entity
screaming into me " I want you to sin for me!!!!!!"
my crufixes are broken and blood fills my eyes
for money and power are the only things that will satisfy
no exceptions this is reality no li(y)e
god is not hear to untagle me this time
walking through the corridors of my apartment
I get my nine and head out to a local clothing department
ready to hit cashier to give the cash here
fear concels her eyes as i look into her mind
fears of going to hell yet dwells in the devils cell
goes to church every sundaynight yet hasnt seen the light
no willpower, no strive for god
just hides behind it so shell get the holy rod
Nonesense! to this my response is...
NO mercy burn in hell for all eternity!
as she expires from this realm the devil gains another soul to feed
as i grab the cash and continue on these sinful deeds


Verse 2:

What happen to me was tragic
was on gods road than did a 180 in to the devils traffic
will now i am a savage that i feared
everyone that i hold dear is a distant memory in my ear
no emotion my eruption is like the ocean exploding
i hear another voice who is the next victim that was chosen?
a young lady laid frozen as she gazed at me with confusion
i cocked back not knowing that god to her was no illusion
her spirituality doged her a fataility
satan had no need for her shield of apathy
she acted accordingly and sprint out of the door
devil cried out he needed more spirits to go
he grows weak, and god remains strong
and I hunger for blood now we all get along
not only that but i lust for women and excitment
dont tell me god will fufull this cynical enlightment
as i grow 2 feet larger i start to grow horns
wings that expand, skin red,long nails,tail, my cloths are all torn
my scorn for god has increased 10 fold
as i see on my head the numbers 666 written in bold
behold the reincarnation of the devil is near us
i rise like a phoenix and with a loud thrust
turn everyone with a doubt of god to microdust


still got 1 more verse or i may expand on this one plz leave a comment or something.

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