New Script ; Check it out and please give feedback if you want

Intro;

N*ggas out there talking sh*t bout' government and no ba-nk roll.
They try to intimidate, but they don't know they' role.
Its getting hard to live this corrupted life,
With bankrupt and overdues, what can we ever do right ?

Chorus; 2x
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Don't do the sh*t your gonna do
If you' ain't gonna change it,
See if they find you n*gga
You better benefit-'it'
(You better not snitch on your hood. . .
Or you'll get whats' coming, for gooood)

I was a fool, for never showing up to high school,
It was jus' the one rule, to be able to drop a jewel .
They said I came up. . .
But didn't post up my sh*t, I told em' n*ggas, that was enough.
I started trippin' told em' "Don't disappoint me now"
But, the same sh*t happend, and then I went down
Didn't change a bit for my sinning life,
Still banging the neighbors daughter, and slutty wife,
But I did it twice .
Oh Lord, forgive me for I have sinned,
Let me live my life, than live in the deadly 'pen'
With bustas' and no forgiveness,
I think I have learned from the past, Im talking serious business .
Questions after, I tell the truth, the whole truth,
Putting me in jail, ain't no use, Ill make a truce .
After going through what I went past, It wouldn't make sense to live,
And don't actually last . So think and. . .

Chorus ; 2x

Years later, I learned that it was too early to die,
So, I came up on a strap, too nervous to shoot a guy,
Immediately, I got rid of it. . .
Started to shoot my foes and didn't give a sh*t,
Giving em' a hit .
They didn't know what was coming to em',
Were lookin' behind they're backs, and I started to loot-em'
f*cked up right ?
But, what could I do, in this destructive life, who. . .
Will help us with our hard struggles, in doom .
Saw too many dead bodies, looked like a cemetary,
Got moved to another place, but was only temporary
I didn't think this out, I was angry, but I couldn't shout,
Or foes would come about, so. . .

Chorus; 4x

First verse is stronger than the second I think, but I like it a lot. Feels real, flows nice. Would be cool if you could slip in a few more multis. Could you check my untitled one? Feedback on that would be great.

I just thought of it today once I got on, so I didn't really think through as much on the second verse, so I made it shorter, haha .