Haiku

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  1. Frankie Jasmine's Avatar

    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Dedicated to my husband:


    Gladly, I comply
    Man of my own heart and soul
    Because you are good
     
  2. Guest said:

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    That's sweet, Frankie I hope he can appreciate your words, in his own way.

    because you are good
    no evil shall befall you
    temptations only

     
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    Little packets of
    joy, bundled, brimming with hope
    Peeping buds anew
     
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    Temptations only
    lie in buttercream heaven
    Shy petals look out
     
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    Minimalistic winter paintings.
    I
    creak
    howling
    snow


    II
    hearth
    blanket
    tea


    III
    holly
    voices
    love
     
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    shy petals, look out
    love might be looking for you
    with sunshine kisses
     
  7. VivaPalestina's Avatar

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    with sunshine kisses
    soft petals caressing touch
    overwhelming warmth
     
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    overwhelming warmth
    palm trees overlook the sea
    waves massage the sand
     
  9. VivaPalestina's Avatar

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    waves massage the sand
    crashing blue against still gold
    golden crystals shine
     
  10. Guest said:

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    I really like that one. Brilliant!


    golden crystals shine
    in the cobalt sea above
    rainbows shoot arrows
     
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    Why thank you. I was trying to work on image capturing skills.

    Rainbows shoot arrows
    Coloured streaks stark upon grey
    an artists palette
     
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    #342 - #345: A beautiful haiku run for both of you! OI's one above--I really like too!


    Rainbows shoot arrows
    Translucent red, blue, purple
    For all hearts on Earth
    Last edited by Frankie Jasmine; 12-26-2012 at 12:02 PM. Reason: spelling correction
     
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    an artist's palette
    colours for all hearts on Earth -
    October maple
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine View Post

    Rainbows shoot arrows
    Transluscent red, blue, purple
    For all hearts on Earth
    Not all hearts Frankie
    little cupids arrows miss
    mine is still waiting
     
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    Not all hearts Frankie
    little cupids arrows miss
    mine is still waiting


    he needs some training
    a few practice shots, and then -
    shot right through your heart

     
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    October maple
    colours of fire branching
    downy orange bed
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by OrchestraInside View Post


    he needs some training
    a few practice shots, and then -
    shot right through your heart

    would it be too much
    to hope for a better aim
    next time, do you think?
     
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    would it be too much
    to hope for a better aim
    next time, do you think?


    hope we always do
    hit - we laugh and miss - we cry
    full of both is life
     
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    downy orange bed
    fit for kings to sleep upon
    rolling waves of land
     
  20. VivaPalestina's Avatar

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    Rolling waves of land
    wide feathered mossy banks
    Green expanse