Hi guys, I was thinking of getting a tattoo (lyrics from Peggy zinas - ena) and I wanted to know if this is how you would write it? (can someone correct where the commas , go I they are wrong?

Can someone please translate them also (I think I know what they say but I'd better check!)

"Αν τολμάς, ολα δικά σου θα γίνουνε εκείνα που τόσο αγαπάς."

and

"Αν τολμάς, όπου θελήσεις και όπου ζητήσεις, στο τέλος θα πας."

I like these two lyrics, they are inspiring to me personally.