Without Your Love

Didn't realise I hadn't posted this…ballad thing, in B-flat major.

Without Your Love - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2012

[Verse]

Without your love,
I'm falling apart,
You're the ruler of,
My heart

Don't go wasting my time,
Cos my time is yours,
Trapped within without,
Any doors

[Pre-Chorus]

Don't know why you came,
But you're sure here to stay

[Chorus]

So don't be playing with me,
Cos you like to be adored,
I'm not property,
Anymore

Wish that I could fly,
Somewhere high above,
Cos I just can't live,
Without your love

[Verse]

Seen you in my dreams,
A thousands times,
Hoping soon you will,
Be mine

Give me strength to live,
But don't bring me down,
Don't want no false hope,
Just need you around

[Pre-Chorus]

Please don't play this game,
Can't last another day

[Chorus]

So don't be playing with me,
Cos you like to be adored,
I'm not property,
Anymore

Wish that I could fly,
Somewhere high above,
Cos I just can't live,
Without your love

[Bridge]

I know you don't mean it but it,
Seems so real,
I can tell you don't want it but I,
Can't help but feel

You there

[Chorus]

So don't be playing with me,
Cos you like to be adored,
I'm not property,
Anymore

Wish that I could fly,
Somewhere high above,
Cos I just can't live,
Without your love

So don't be playing with me,
Cos you like to be adored,
I'm not property,
Anymore

Wish that I could fly,
Somewhere high above,
Cos I just can't live,
Without your love

Thanks

yeah really like this... a simple little tune but not overdone like so many I read... would sound great.. just hope it's not too long, doesn't seem like it is... anyways.. good job

Some cracking use of the English language in there.

The only thing I would change is

Wish that I could fly,
Somewhere high above,
Cos I just cannot live,
Without your love


It seems to flow better in my head that way anyway, good work fella