my 2nd lyrics- the day you were gone

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  1. dahotshotda said:

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    every day we woke up beside each other
    but now its not you its always another
    man that i see beside me in my bed
    i just cant get the fact that youre now dead
    its crowling inside so very slowly
    i cant take it anymore im so lonly
    every night in my dreams saying youre right behind
    where are you, i cant see you im loosing my mind

    since that day im not alive
    im going crazy i cant survive
    you were my heart and my soul
    and since youre gone this world's a black hole
    why did it happend in that special day
    i remmember it like it was yesterday

    i tryed to get over you but i dont
    always a voice inside me saying i won't
    our life is not going according to plan
    and now im married to another man
    but you always will own my heart
    i'll never forget you, without you im falling apart

    since that day im not alive
    im going crazy i cant survive
    maybe we just werent meant to be
    maybe this is our destiny
    its like it was yesterday i remmember
    but ill never forget it, the 11th of september

    who ever has any suggetions for making the lyrics better id be happy to hear and for spelling corrections ty
    Last edited by dahotshotda; 03-04-2012 at 04:10 PM.
     
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    Mixalopoulos said:

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    Every day we awoke beside each other
    But now it's not you it's just another
    The man that I see beside me in bed
    I just can't comprehend that you're now dead
    It's crawling inside so very slowly
    I can't take it anymore I'm so lonely
    Every night in my dreams saying you're right behind
    Where are you, I can't see you I'm losing my mind

    Since that day I'm not alive
    I'm going crazy I cant survive
    You were my heart and my soul
    And since you're gone this world's a black hole
    Why did it happen on that special day
    I remember it like it was yesterday

    I tried to get over you but I don't
    Always a voice inside me saying I won't
    Our life is not going according to plan
    And now I'm married to another man
    But you will always own my heart
    I'll never forget you, without you I'm falling apart

    Since that day I'm not alive
    I'm going crazy I can't survive
    Maybe we just weren't meant to be
    Maybe this is our destiny
    It's like it was yesterday I remember
    But I'll never forget it, the 9th of September
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  3. dahotshotda said:

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    thanks
    what do you think about the lyrics ?
     
  4. dahotshotda said:

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    and i meant the 11th of september lol what a big mistake :S
     
  5. katadolph said:

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    Hi again.

    Sorry I don't seem to be able to message you from my own thread.

    Wondered if you might have any suggestions regarding a good (Enlish speaking) Estate Agent in Athens? This seems to be my most urgent concern at the moment.

    Cheers, Kat.
     
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    Experimentalist said:

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    Really emotive lyrical work there, I guess writing this has helped you in your grief somewhat. I love what music can do!!
     
  7. dahotshotda said:

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    thanks
    have any ideas to improve ?
     
  8. rashid.martin123@gmail.co said:

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    This is really good.....Heartbreaking to lose the one you truly love