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    I lied, there isn't even a point at going back at that, I'm nowhere near good enough lmao. Nice one man.

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    Shouldn't it be bar for bar? 16 vs 16 and not 16 vs 46? then again its not a proper battle board so it doesn't really matter ha!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyler6270 View Post
    I lied, there isn't even a point at going back at that, I'm nowhere near good enough lmao. Nice one man.
    Thanks. yours was good though and I like your approach to battlerap. keep it up.
    I'm always in need of more practise. if you're not satisfied with your drops yet either.. why not go a few more rounds for the practice eh? I'm certainly up for it.

    Quote Originally Posted by JD101 View Post
    Shouldn't it be bar for bar? 16 vs 16 and not 16 vs 46? then again its not a proper battle board so it doesn't really matter ha!
    There are plenty of dedicated battle boards out there with strict rules regarding bar count and flips, drawn out registration processes for battles, judging. etc.
    IMO a great aspect of this board is the relaxed cypher style battling and the appreciation of a wider range of styles and techniques, with emphasis on enjoyment and self improvement. I don't even view battle rap as competitive really, just about personal preferences.
    I write however many bars I want to at the time and ofcourse everyone else is free to do likewise or to speak with an opponent and agree on a fixed bar count.
    Last edited by _SBU; 06-01-2012 at 04:21 PM.

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    I put my heart in this from the start
    tell the truth im here to end a battle
    I can tell you this I don't need a voucher
    Shuttin it down fire the bad umpire
    Hot raps that soothe my sore muscles
    I'm use to actually being in war
    This with you is just a tustle
    I was bad in the begginning that was just my hustle
    I build it up just so I can tear it down
    Nobody can stop it when I come around
    I'm addicted to this style of rap i bite and you nip
    I don't need strat when I come in full clip
    Every line is like a big hit when I spit
    You drool when you speak and it shows in your flow
    Too slow for my taste I'm closin' the show
    My passion has already been done and grown
    It's time for you to pack up and just head home
    I don't need a license I put your fire out I ice it
    I refresh the same old boring game
    No one can stand it you mcs are all the same
    Spineless script so I can take the bends of reality
    Spin 'em in a web and let 'em drop all around me
    Softer than bars of gold but worth more than diamond
    I was at the bottom and the top is where I'm climbin'
    I dropped the plot when I started so I could be on my spot
    No need for plans when the story comes and writes itself
    I can tell it and share it let this beat that I have come to inherit
    Let my music blare already I want the whole world to hear it
    I read all your rhymes already and put your book back up on the shelf
    Step aside I'm comin in quick to shut down your grinder
    My words overrun your style because mine are shinier
    I spit off all this Like I'm coming in automatic
    You still spitin' like you on semi-automatic
    Can't handle me anymore I aim with a plan to become famous
    After all what we become is what will make us.

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    can't be too nice wit these cowards
    born 94, was ballin; juwan howard
    devour a n*gga prior to his power; richard
    these liar liars so blue, no green no b*tches
    except for they soul, that's b*tch enough
    if the sharks ain't speakin hit the kitchen up
    fly to f*ckin deaf, better listen up
    oh & fly? that cali-bud is my distant love.
    oh & fly? call me, stork,jay, pigeon, dove
    oh & fly? so fly I'm the ceiling's rug
    on this site, all I see is like a million scrubs.
    who prolly need a scrub, where tha fukn suds?
    oh & fly? we all know bird is the word
    so forward, never backing & that's word to my words.
    oh & fly? that's word to the birds.

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    Oh wait hold the instrumental I'll show you how to do it with real flow
    I'm about to wreck this beat
    show you why not to step to me
    Lame scheme, no money can't even produce a big hit
    Ripped up the paper with bad rhymes your a bad fit
    I tear it up verbally from my town locally to the whole world globally
    Before starting to rap you may want to invest into something other than a five year old's vocabulary
    Words sharper than wisdom when I come in I'll cut straight into your capillary
    Like a bird with no wings you have no take off
    Blowin' up like a bomb I'm set off
    Can't handle it then i knew you were too soft
    Your free raps burn children's ears raw
    Keep runnin' from me like Oj from the law
    No more games I'm puttin it down
    Make sure you can actually rap before you come around.

    Let it sound off I'm boomin up sirens now
    Can't feel me when I drop it too fast don't even make a sound
    Take some power and you can't produce, outage
    Write some good raps instead of tryin' to salvage
    Million scrubs when you're the worst of 'em all
    Come in ballin' on my court your gonna get the ball
    too bad you dropped it spendin' five minutes on birds
    Open up a Webster boy learn some new words
    Youaretheskipp when your song comes on it's never a hit
    People hear the first drop and make sure to skip
    Just let it be you can't ever beat it up
    You need to quit rhymin' I've already had enough
    Let bad things go, like a dove from it's cage
    I'll tear you up on every single rap page
    Junior Member skill is an evident lack
    Rhymes so bad coming out in a body sac
    I think your time is up, time to step back.

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    is these lyrics? they not cuz I never feel ya
    u can't deliver a deal to tha muthafukn dealer.
    is u crazy, insane, or mentally ill?
    ya none, I will slip up & accidentally kill
    a junior member, is not enough to describe me
    perfect timing for an issue to try & suscribe me
    ya not ****, like ya piss. & ya diss?
    the only n*gga that'll let u f*uckin kiss his fist
    elementary *** rhymes, tighten up
    u a pup, I'ma titan stuck in a freestylin word
    while this n*gga writin up..
    u too lil, college's not enough knowledge
    u wrote 2 paragraph of complete ****in garbage
    & u wonder why I laugh at ya rhymes cuz ya weak
    a scared dog barks, or he dissed.. so to speak
    maaan, u typed so much bullshit, lmao go to sleep.
    I honestly laughed like is this cat forreal?
    he think he really real, man this sh*t is unreal.
    my one paragraph is enough for ya 2

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    ^
    that was cold, ill heat things up just to watch thy steam 'rise'
    a 'graph' grows but - theiving 'pup' - whats with the 19 lines?
    are you "crazy? mentally ill? insane?" you might "..slip up"
    slip up^ to another line and amaze or get scripts cut -
    dude, with the 'fists' ..what?
    your too lost in doubt bro..
    youre 'on fire'. get 'housed' with a douse blow an 'spouse' throwed..

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    you hit, chris, and emit rifts spit dribbling..
    where -
    ..im abit sick.
    kick with pin pricks - rigged riddelin.

    go back to your grim fix of 'fish'ed styx and kicked 'kindlin',
    'fire'? look at the thick strips of which with ive been fideling.

    inked, yea look at my paw this 'dawg' handles scrypt max,
    heard you were rapping for pinks, "man, oh" go fix that.
    or back to the flag of white, fly it through the mist as..
    ..you imagine your passions fade, face fate an drift fast.


    fashion to lick facts and syntx this Leno whit is slanderish.
    but f***k that im 'tacking his minnowed phibs whith hammer fists
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    Quote Originally Posted by _SBU View Post
    Thanks. yours was good though and I like your approach to battlerap. keep it up.
    I'm always in need of more practise. if you're not satisfied with your drops yet either.. why not go a few more rounds for the practice eh? I'm certainly up for it.


    There are plenty of dedicated battle boards out there with strict rules regarding bar count and flips, drawn out registration processes for battles, judging. etc.
    IMO a great aspect of this board is the relaxed cypher style battling and the appreciation of a wider range of styles and techniques, with emphasis on enjoyment and self improvement. I don't even view battle rap as competitive really, just about personal preferences.
    I write however many bars I want to at the time and ofcourse everyone else is free to do likewise or to speak with an opponent and agree on a fixed bar count.
    you hit, chris, and emit rifts spit dribbling..
    where -
    ..im abit sick.
    kick with pin pricks - rigged riddelin.

    go back to your grim fix of 'fish'ed styx and kicked 'kindlin',
    'fire'? look at the thick strips of which with ive been fideling.

    inked, yea look at my paw this 'dawg' handles scrypt max,
    heard you were rapping for pinks, "man, oh" go fix that.
    or back to the flag of white, fly it through the mist as..
    ..you imagine your passions fade, face fate an drift fast.


    fashion to 'mix' facts and syntx his 'ditto' whit is slanderish.
    but f***k that im 'tacking his minnowed phibs whith hammer fists
    Last edited by smoothtung; 06-12-2012 at 08:17 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyler6270 View Post
    I put my heart in this from the start
    tell the truth im here to end a battle
    I can tell you this I don't need a voucher
    Shuttin it down fire the bad umpire
    Hot raps that soothe my sore muscles
    I'm use to actually being in war
    This with you is just a tustle
    I was bad in the begginning that was just my hustle
    I build it up just so I can tear it down
    Nobody can stop it when I come around
    I'm addicted to this style of rap i bite and you nip
    I don't need strat when I come in full clip
    Every line is like a big hit when I spit
    You drool when you speak and it shows in your flow
    Too slow for my taste I'm closin' the show
    My passion has already been done and grown
    It's time for you to pack up and just head home
    I don't need a license I put your fire out I ice it
    I refresh the same old boring game
    No one can stand it you mcs are all the same
    Spineless script so I can take the bends of reality
    Spin 'em in a web and let 'em drop all around me
    Softer than bars of gold but worth more than diamond
    I was at the bottom and the top is where I'm climbin'
    I dropped the plot when I started so I could be on my spot
    No need for plans when the story comes and writes itself
    I can tell it and share it let this beat that I have come to inherit
    Let my music blare already I want the whole world to hear it
    I read all your rhymes already and put your book back up on the shelf
    Step aside I'm comin in quick to shut down your grinder
    My words overrun your style because mine are shinier
    I spit off all this Like I'm coming in automatic
    You still spitin' like you on semi-automatic
    Can't handle me anymore I aim with a plan to become famous
    After all what we become is what will make us.

    I give you props for giving me props but not for your writing.
    if you didn't catch that.. I won, it's decided.
    you put heart in from the start? that makes it even worse..
    you really love rap but you still can't write a decent verse.

    the lyrics didn't appeal to me and didn't apply to me.
    I won against this zero, it's simple as binary.
    any liar's quite inventive, Ty's the type to try pretendin'.
    ..if he's got heart and packs a tech' I'm biocybernetic.
    the lil' nipper's crying.. teething issues, he admits to biting.
    if he thinks he's poppin' caps the kid's trippin'.. psilocybin?

    I've flipped his name before so now I'll flip the way his ethic's made,
    wait, let me demonstrate.. I already burned him but I'm serving him anyway.
    I'll bring some heat then make him leave like it's takeout.
    he's medium but it's rare that I say well done, like a steakhouse.
    his lines are quite nice, not proper battle bars.
    he ceased the beef like a sabotaged abatoir.

    why boast? you're just chicken. fly? roast.
    I'd rock your grill then spill spirits as I toast.
    you got high supporting my shine like a lightpost.
    you're not worth diamond, your shine's like a rhinestone's.

    he lacks strength, sat benched. I'm an umpire..
    if he ain't got game then I won't judge Tyler.
    I'm much higher.. dangerously fly like drunk pilots.
    I only block his shine to help him see clearly. like sun visors.
    I'm rapping dope plus heavy and direct. blunt styles.
    this diss taught he distorted my record. blunt stylus.

    he attempts to compare us but we're incomparable..
    I'm a wolf mauling this fluffy puppy, we're different animals.
    I don't really feel your "wars" or your "tustles",
    I did that with syntax and I'm lord of the rubble.
    huh. I hold weight and mack like ten ton trucks when I'm being street.
    I aint out to make cake but I'll ice this sponge for being sweet.
    "sore muscles", grumbling with every minor move. Tyler's through.
    I'm tired too.. flyer moves.. Phuket, like a Thai masseuse.

    you're not wholly lyrical, behold the pinnacle.
    please at least try to rhyme multi syllables.
    then in turn try internals and some wordplay too..
    hymen; tyler's passages aint made a breakthrough.

    I married rap and raised a family.
    word is born. casey anthony.
    or your entire body of work was born lifeless.
    I never force a rhyme, I force rhymers.
    if there were better competitors here I'd ignore Tyler.
    even you admitted you aint fit for this, and you're biased.
    you seem to keep bigging up pop', like you're China.
    my lyricism's bringing in Art', like Paul Simon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    you hit, chris, and emit rifts spit dribbling..
    where -
    ..im abit sick.
    kick with pin pricks - rigged riddelin.

    go back to your grim fix of 'fish'ed styx and kicked 'kindlin',
    'fire'? look at the thick strips of which with ive been fideling.

    inked, yea look at my paw this 'dawg' handles scrypt max,
    heard you were rapping for pinks, "man, oh" go fix that.
    or back to the flag of white, fly it through the mist as..
    ..you imagine your passions fade, face fate an drift fast.


    fashion to 'mix' facts and syntx his 'ditto' whit is slanderish.
    but f***k that im 'tacking his minnowed phibs whith hammer fists
    aha, good to see you back man. I hope all's going well.
    anyways..

    ey.. James Joyce..
    I mean.. your rap style's quite a strange choice.
    you make noise with a raised voice, it sounds bad,
    if you quit music.. that'd be a sound plan.

    ey, window licker.. I mean.. smooth tung..
    you just honk and waddle around like a goose does.
    "minnowed phibs with hammer fists"?? you're embarassing; I'm a lyricist.
    my hammer crafts the barrel that these little fish are swimming in.
    you're saying that you've got 'ink on your paw'?
    then I'm like a lion with a squid in it's jaws.
    I mean.. you know I'm down with abstract rap and weird imagery..
    but you just bust clusters of absurd words without real synergy.

    your flow makes me mad like the flagon's dry..
    so I spoonerize rhymes and make dragons fly.
    the kid's trippin'.. you're slippin' as you fantasize.
    you get juiced and take 2 Ls. like the fanta size.
    just waive that "flag of white" like a phantom's flight.
    you don't quite battle right, a bad design of samurai..

    that was mean. you're like a katana dawg..
    nah.. I mean you're like a cat an' a dog:
    a little p***y and a b****. now quit cussin'.
    you dropped the f bomb with no wit, bring something.
    he needs a fix like a "rigged riddlin"..
    he seems hyped like the scrip's ritilin.
    he's soft as a box with pink kittens in.
    he lost his smooth tung young like he licked scissortips.

    ey.. smoothtung.. you're withering, you've forgotten your roots bruv.
    keep buzzing off the top' like you're getting a crew cut.
    my flow's fly like fine "mist".
    yours isnt. like.. fine. missed.
    "fashion" doesn't matter kid.. examine it.
    my style's making you look like a mannequin.
    your aspiring drops make me wanna drop aspirin.
    and beating you doesnt even constitute 'practising'.
    you're saying you've got "hammer fists"?
    ..but judged unfit when the gavel hits.
    beat me? you couldn't even beat panelling.
    you couldn't even beat yourself.. a bad masochist.
    you're just an actor, don't I know you from some other plot?
    ..like I'm "kicking pin pricks" and this Hellraiser's puzzle box.
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    all is straight now over here, glad to see you're going hard as ever. im lovin it.
    but, on to it..

    'fly 'dragons'? - i'll 'sleigh' them riding through gold sunsets.
    im hungry (passion) - this time i aint going unfed.
    on puntry im man'o'Kin like this ^one said..
    ..so if Hellraiser came and got to me well then tons bled.
    But in fun, head.. im back, so in fact some should re-joice.
    quit attackin my back an'.. - you? fun enough to read Joyce?
    no you feen toys hate 'mean boys' who dicipher what's your 'puzzle box'.
    ..feel coy hoss? im poised dawg but exploit flaws like my muzzle's soft.
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    hate to dissapoint when you gave me so much, ill have to make it up to you when im back on

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    ill slay a unicorn quick an send chris the sawed-off ivory,
    im-a-b**ch to be thought-of-lightly.
    im in a ditch throwing bombs that-all-fall-atop my feet
    and amidst-the-mist crawls behing me, Chris, armed and rampid..
    im alarmed but unharmed, and i'll be damned kid..
    if i dont break a charmers neck with a text hex that landed.
    ive been abondoned, no land-an' im expanding..
    fodding seems in what seams to be 'the best's, best ranting..

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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    all is straight now over here, glad to see you're going hard as ever. im lovin it.
    but, on to it..

    'fly 'dragons'? - i'll 'sleigh' them riding through gold sunsets.
    im hungry (passion) - this time i aint going unfed.
    on puntry im man'o'Kin like this ^one said..
    ..so if Hellraiser came and got to me well then tons bled.
    But in fun, head.. im back, so in fact some should re-joice.
    quit attackin my back an'.. - you? fun enough to read Joyce?
    no you feen toys hate 'mean boys' who dicipher what's your 'puzzle box'.
    ..feel coy hoss? im poised dawg but exploit flaws like my muzzle's soft.
    ^ ..the reason I dont even believe in your trust,
    you claim I'm attacking your back but you're all front.
    you aint fought in support of a cause once.
    consider me Cain if you're able; it's war bruv.
    you seem deep ..I mean, you've got poor-"poise".
    nah I'm just playin' ..I mean, you're all "toys".
    my shine covers all the angles; your Shaadow's gone.
    you twitter and retweet sweetly like a sparrow's song;
    your flow's quite nice but your lyrics are nonsense.
    you're back but you've not got a spot on the roster.

    your "golden sunset"s worthless, your weary soul's lethargic.
    your rap maxed ..I mean, wrapped macs ..golden arches.
    saying you're "lovin' it"? it's quite humbling.
    you lost love like your job at the rubbish tip.
    my rap's real so it's "hard" coz the struggle is.
    I'm just playing. I diss you for the fun of it.
    but just admit you're unequipped for puns an' flips.
    ..duck and quit or run the script and double it.

    "re:Joyce".. I'm Odd'as'he.. huh, I read Ulysses.
    I write my raps like you're reading your eulogy.
    you're not quite "unfed", you just beg..
    you mope in hope there's a crust or some crumbs left.
    I'm a thirsty lyricist. (spirited).
    yeah we can see that you're hungry. (thin as twigs).
    you'd literally try to bite an apple laptop.
    damn, stop. bad"dawg". your plan's wrong.
    I'm so fly that my mind's like a blackbox.
    you think that you're fly with that 'drag'on'.
    my venom's like an adder's jaws puncturing a man'o'war.
    you're a "man'o'kin" and wooden as that fam of yours.
    I disaprove and diss but prove that I'm a kinsman too.
    you're disgracing your family tree like you killed the roots.
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    what about 'wrapped macs' and 'golden arches'...
    that erratic 'attack-it' habbit veered the mark.. and appeared far.
    and im sorry an against this.. but bro its grown 'retarded'..
    you can bet you'll bet against him like its stakes race and he's parched.
    he's the only one grooving like he's 'ungluing' at the beach bar,
    so if his dreds arent worth telling about well then i think his beeds are.
    like its stake race, your man'o'war.. im 3 speed cars.
    ill finish, restart, finish.. an watch from where the cheap seats are.
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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    what about 'wrapped macs' and 'golden arches'...
    that erratic 'attack-it' habbit veered the mark.. and appeared far.
    and im sorry an against this.. but bro its grown 'retarded'..
    you can bet you'll bet against him like its stakes race and he's parched.
    he's the only one grooving like he's 'ungluing' at the beach bar,
    so if his dreds arent worth telling about well then i think his beeds are.
    like its stake race, your man'o'war.. im 3 speed cars.
    ill finish, restart, finish.. an watch from where the cheap seats are.
    huh.
    "wrapped macs", "golden arches".. your bars are just fast food.
    this is live, beef but with brains and the heart too.
    you're a bigot livin in a white hood like klu klux.
    drop that dirty 'habit', like a nude nun.
    cut out that smooth tung like customised shoes bruv'.
    you don't spit sick but you'll spew blood. smoothtung.

    called me "retarded"? from you that's some praise fam;
    you're just dustin'. this is my 'reign' man.
    I'm high and I soar, saw you're sore coz you aint fly.
    you used to use great lines ..is this even the same guy?
    you're not expressing hiphop in your lyrics..
    you should just stick to rock, like a limpet.
    I aint "ungluing". word's my bond.
    you've come unstuck, you've fallen off.
    betting against me? you'd bet against all odds.
    you see red and attempt to break even at all costs.
    ..your jaw dropped like your tooth stung
    and you're choking on your smooth tung,
    it's chewed up. your rough stuff isn't smoothtung'ery.
    you couldn't buy my silence. like truth's currency.
    it's poor, your rap bores me. you lack glory,
    like your biting, whining, spineless lil back-story.
    we lost some fine writers ..now he's replacing the best?
    ..you should've stayed away and sent us CheesyBacon instead.
    damn, sorry.
    I aint down to battle rap softly.
    complaining I'm attacking you? ..that's all talk.
    you struck first an' it aint my fault that you lack force.
    you barely know your own past, let alone how rap developed.
    now your most disrespectful element's the lack of effort.
    Last edited by _SBU; 06-14-2012 at 01:10 PM.

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    ay.. uhh. Lets get to business.
    if you were a big hit well s**t bra THIS kid missed it.
    Quick whit with the ‘spit sick’ flip trick, that was ‘shick sit’
    ‘you’re toy’, trinket . and ‘rock’? you’re not ‘limp-et’s, ..limp biscuit.

    If you think-chris-its, contested’s proven?..
    Lets get to it, you WILL spit sick, peeping intestinal-fluid. the 'best' will 'spew it'..
    Yea its rap, hip-hop, an ‘..if I-got-arrested-I’ll’ .. screw it.
    Im down to play dirty like chess in infested sewers.
    A molested 'student' couldn’t possess a more truer 'lesson'.
    im swaying the mood with a force like lunar crescents…
    Im playing with ‘roots’, messin. like some blues and dudes with trumpets.
    But who.. this dudes the groove cuz he prove’s to brew a pun/flip?

    im down to love hip hop and write hard,
    ive been in the pit, hoss, so forgive if i like.. spar.
    im not guna drip jaws when i spit cuz im quite par,
    but man i will fight a car, and i'll ride a star. far.

    and im off in a direction most of you dont quite see,
    it's where i like to be,
    im untracable.. like.. tyson speed.
    and despite the greed there's a right in me..
    and if you'd like to see, i will light the scene.
    but i will be colder than a night at sea...
    i'd be bolder but im pushing, christ might smight my feet.
    cuz..

    ive done alot of things that might raise a browe or two..
    so to be where i am now its been just a flower bloom
    Last edited by smoothtung; 06-14-2012 at 06:03 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    ay.. uhh. Lets get to business.
    if you were a big hit well s**t bra THIS kid missed it.
    Quick whit with the ‘spit sick’ flip trick, that was ‘shick sit’
    ‘you’re toy’, trinket . and ‘rock’? you’re not ‘limp-et’s, ..limp biscuit.

    If you think-chris-its, contested’s proven?..
    Lets get to it, you WILL spit sick, peeping intestinal-fluid. the 'best' will 'spew it'..
    Yea its rap, hip-hop, an ‘..if I-got-arrested-I’ll’ .. screw it.
    Im down to play dirty like chess in infested sewers.
    A molested 'student' couldn’t possess a more truer 'lesson'.
    im swaying the mood with a force like lunar crescents…
    Im playing with ‘roots’, messin. like some blues and dudes with trumpets.
    But who.. this dudes the groove cuz he prove’s to brew a pun/flip?

    im down to love hip hop and write hard,
    ive been in the pit, hoss, so forgive if i like.. spar.
    im not guna drip jaws when i spit cuz im quite par,
    but man i will fight a car, and i'll ride a star. far.

    and im off in a direction most of you dont quite see,
    it's where i like to be,
    im untracable.. like.. tyson speed.
    and despite the greed there's a right in me..
    and if you'd like to see, i will light the scene.
    but i will be colder than a night at sea...
    i'd be bolder but im pushing, christ might smight my feet.
    cuz..

    ive done alot of things that might raise a browe or two..
    so to be where i am now its been just a flower bloom

    I taught him to rap but it shames me to say it.
    he never learned to write with the right rhymes or phrasing.
    this is justice, it just is. it aint hating.
    I wrote dope rap.. he saw fit to take it.
    he stole my lines coz he lacks in ability
    and admitted to it, as if he still had some dignity.
    that's exactly how it was.. I keep it really real.
    but flip it with the feat of strength kicking his achilles heel.

    I sting and you sink to the ground like dying butterflies..
    "tyson speed". you bite 'ere, I'm the other guy..
    like this is a holy-field and that act's blasphemous.
    the bad plan's amateur and lacks calibre.
    my rap's arrogant but mad passionate..
    your rap's.. nothing much, it's just adequate.
    you're not saying anything. anyways, stop it.
    a year ago you showed some potential but lost it.
    by now you should be writing hard bars or some decent songs.
    what little skill you started off with only ever seems to drop.
    smooth tung.. you proved love of yourself but not hiphop.
    I'd tell you to put in spirit but you're not equipped dawg.
    I'd tell you to put in some work but you did that..
    so your moves just prove that your wit isn't fit fam.
    why try kidding me? just wise up.
    try euthanasia, it's not a tie son.
    ..youth'an'asia, thai s.. nevermind.
    even if I spell it out you couldnt get a clever line.
    see what I did there? no? then forget it,
    you don't know the meaning of being inventive.
    and I won't waste hate since you're coming with nothing.
    ..you just blow ..so I'll trump-it.

    see, I beat him way back.. seems he's in a coma still.
    I even pray they drop his coffin.. total overkill.
    you're not required to write. you're a joke bruv.
    I just laugh at you when you think you bring dope stuff.
    it takes more than winning battles to win respect.
    you need to take a long look at yourself bruv.. introspect.
    ...ay, there's more than just some intricate rhyme and ridiculous wordplay to my lyrics.
    ...I'll take 'u' out the 'game' an make... nah, it'll stay the same like you never were in it.

    ay, smoothtung.. I already said you've forgotten your roots bruv.
    ..you're sappy and you're pining.. just spruce up.
    you're droppin' manure sayin' "flowers bloom".
    just 'alter' the 'attitude' and gain 'altitude'.
    I schooled you lots but I'll never be proud of you.
    you bite and hide ..like cowards do.

    ay.. forkedtung..
    you're all talk plus it's all false bruv.
    I'm blessing it like I'm making jewish bread.
    you chat fraff, I rap truth instead.
    I dissed his-story so let's look at his future..
    it's going to waste like his junk's a pollutant.
    he's reading this wrong if he's feeling inspired..
    expired. if he could comprehend this script he'd retire.

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