Come get slaughtered!

Ive got rappers block.. Lol i lost it SBU

sirfolsom???
You got to be kidding me_
Do you really want to change your diapers???Or just wipe your $hit up on your sleeve?
You really want to get down_
Now you won't be stopping me!!!

Cause in the parallel World_
That your living,
With your handy dandy Quevezzz_

When you vaporize the toilet
with every breath you breathe....
and you start to pray to GOD,
As your little universe
starts to leave..then you suddenly wake up..
Your in "Folsom"...
It's not a dream_

Still a convict, and a loser!!!
All your life....
Don't mess with me_
Find a new profession,
"Bit CH"
with your bowl and dirty knees....

I can't believe you erase my $hit, then use my $hit!!! Don't worry I copyright everything I post here. Sad that you finish your little day dream with the verse I wrote!! Pu$$y!!!!!!!!

That post was for Rion Gilliam

why all of you erase my post, then use what I wrote in you lyrics!!! What a joke!!!!

Smoothtung.you delete my $hit too..I just gave you all material!!! Use it up_

Nothing but babies talking $hit and Stealing everyones lyrics, then they delete your flows!!! So glad I copy-write every word I write!!!!

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Comin in droppin hot make sure I'm slayin
Brutally beaten, none of you be stayin
Thoughts seedin drop your body like heavy baggage
When I rip it up, I always tear it savage

You rhyme for eight and down, just like dr.seuss
Please, end it now, I setup the noose
Your flow is weak, and your scheme is loose
No more from you, unless you're found on the news..

Like a wet firecracker you drop just like a dud
Trying to blast through walls but you straight hit a stud
What you try to get across is as clear as mud
It's Trina Marie season and I'm Elmer Fudd

Let the beat hit a few more good times
Comin in with all these brand new fresh lines
Honestly I can't sit here and bear your rhymes
When no one likes your drop, here's your sign.

O.K.Tyler or Elmer Fudd,
What do you call what your writing_
When You tear it salvage? What is clear mud?

You just flowed about the same_
Without any knowledge,
Not using your brain!!!

No one will be stayin,
Cause you all delete every ones lyrics
Then use it in your rap
That's what I call hatin!!!!

Originally Posted by smoothtung

I enjoy writing my stuff out but if you guys are taking lines as well it's an insult to the time it takes me.

Practice what you preach!!! And why is it o.k. for them to steal my lines??

...simply enjoy the talents in the writing...thats all...


I dreamwalk and sleeptalk about rap's cream and yolk
passive to sexuality but still fame the ladies block
swallow fakes in a gulp n' barely stuck in my throat
pukin refuse in a tub n no chance of sailing the boat
coldhearted and i'm still building muscle
got weider on speed dial, n' trainin the rap mile
my style's gone viral, aint vocal, but sounds lethal
see all..i mean to say is, hip hop is me call
so back off,go smoke some crack off your shack joint
hold up at a conner n' face the cops at gun point
helpless surrender cuz your ill fate is well coined
n' heads or tails youll be headless at some point
boeng...i sprang from the ashes like a phoenix
with a hitlist, n' cleansed it like i'm fix it
wrapped it,took a baseball bat n' smashed it
so i live in it, foundation of steel and bricks...(echo)

Originally Posted by Trina Marie

O.K.Tyler or Elmer Fudd,
What do you call what your writing_
When You tear it salvage? What is clear mud?

You just flowed about the same_
Without any knowledge,
Not using your brain!!!

No one will be stayin,
Cause you all delete every ones lyrics
Then use it in your rap
That's what I call hatin!!!!

Dearest Trina Marie, can you read?
I said savage not salvage dead beat
But please criticize a man with flow and a beat, but be sure your ready to tame before unleashing the beast
I feast on mc's claiming a false intellect
By defaults you'll claim regret that you tried to a test a man with a prophets introspect
Drop down on your knees and give me the brain, otherwise you got nothing to gain
Sit back and relax as I pull out a pen and a pad, so I can teach this class how to bite back
Fighting viciously with a dog that has no bite, broken teeth and lyrics alike
I'm slaughter freestyles better than you murder crows, *****, drop out the game and just go home.

my flow is the killer....serial and i go so bloody period..

I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you
MI-CRO-SCOPIC
Your “Rhymes a Joke” lemme guess, you couldn’t
“find the scope”
I’ll have you left just like your rhymes, cause your
Rhymes is Broke
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope
If you anger me, my daggers gonna COLLIDE-with
ya-THROAT
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you
BUY~the~DOPE
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a
MICROSCOPE
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say I~SEE~YOU
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U
Intensive Care Unit
When It comes 2 Rhymin I don’t care Christain,
Catholic, Or Anglican
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a
MANICAN
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b
facing me
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?
10 times your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH
VALUE(Check the Dictionary)
I come in “storming”, “*****, this” is Me, I'm like
a GLOBAL WARMING
SO Beware cause this Is your
ONLY~WARNING

I'm breaking dudes accords I guess it might have to be an end of discussion
I speak invocal chords to a point I'm as dangerous as a bloody sword
U think u sound cocky dude u dnt even hav a ****
Dnt come close gay even dat wack rhyme wuld sell on ebay

Originally Posted by Trina Marie

O.K.Tyler or Elmer Fudd,
What do you call what your writing_
When You tear it salvage? What is clear mud?

You just flowed about the same_
Without any knowledge,
Not using your brain!!!

No one will be stayin,
Cause you all delete every ones lyrics
Then use it in your rap
That's what I call hatin!!!!

Ha Ha Ha

Originally Posted by Montino

I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you
MI-CRO-SCOPIC
Your “Rhymes a Joke” lemme guess, you couldn’t
“find the scope”
I’ll have you left just like your rhymes, cause your
Rhymes is Broke
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope
If you anger me, my daggers gonna COLLIDE-with
ya-THROAT
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you
BUY~the~DOPE
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a
MICROSCOPE
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say I~SEE~YOU
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U
Intensive Care Unit
When It comes 2 Rhymin I don’t care Christain,
Catholic, Or Anglican
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a
MANICAN
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b
facing me
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?
10 times your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH
VALUE(Check the Dictionary)
I come in “storming”, “*****, this” is Me, I'm like
a GLOBAL WARMING
SO Beware cause this Is your
ONLY~WARNING

I got a little issue
That I’m gonna pick with you
Now lets take a minute to think this through
Before there was you
There was your dad’s pile of goo
And I don’t see much improved
After he fck-ed you know who
Who bore you and you bore too
When you spew these sad *** lines
like a genocide to good minds
That tire and cry when you talking big time
With lines borrowed from the state farm guy
That depreciate each time you try
Like your mind over time
Don’t bother too, write it off soon
Cause you a total loss, dude

Originally Posted by Trina Marie

sirfolsom???
You got to be kidding me_
Do you really want to change your diapers???Or just wipe your $hit up on your sleeve?
You really want to get down_
Now you won't be stopping me!!!

Cause in the parallel World_
That your living,
With your handy dandy Quevezzz_

When you vaporize the toilet
with every breath you breathe....
and you start to pray to GOD,
As your little universe
starts to leave..then you suddenly wake up..
Your in "Folsom"...
It's not a dream_

Still a convict, and a loser!!!
All your life....
Don't mess with me_
Find a new profession,
"Bit CH"
with your bowl and dirty knees....

you funny to hear call you cleft lip
right has returned so shoot off the left hip
yall feel safe cause county had me on a forced trip
sorry marie your over par so FOUR you trick

sweet tea dont sweat T
could skeet in a white T so freely
not call you back n tell your friends he feels me
eatin Trix with no milk dont ever fill me
beating chicks like scrambled eggs pay the skillet fee
my words are through the fryer burning every category

so stop wishing id scoop that shi+
no hustle n flow, i just whooped that trick
this southern cracker just way too sick
ill just keep you on the Tip of my dik

they hating cuz im raising the hem of this game n'
i aint slowing im growing against gravity's weight n'
i hold mics like i'm strangling and' killing
...spit rhymes like im preaching to heathens
and i aint giving up..keep the condemnation
lyrically viral till your doomed damnation
click...click..to my assassination
will raise this bar..for all crowns intentioned...

I'm nicer than pete but I'm on a serch to crush a miilkbone
im everlasting, I melt vanilla like silicone
im ill enough to just straight up diss you for no reason
im colder than snow season when it's 20 below freezing
flavor with no seasoning
this is the sneak preview
i'll diss your magazine and still won't get a weak review
i'll make your freak leave you
smell the Folgers crystals
this is a lyrical combat
gentlemen hold your pistols
smd

Originally Posted by SupaHotFire

I'm nicer than pete but I'm on a serch to crush a miilkbone
im everlasting, I melt vanilla like silicone
im ill enough to just straight up diss you for no reason
im colder than snow season when it's 20 below freezing
flavor with no seasoning
this is the sneak preview
i'll diss your magazine and still won't get a weak review
i'll make your freak leave you
smell the Folgers crystals
this is a lyrical combat
gentlemen hold your pistols
smd

SupaHotFire done been blowed out, kids a nobody lets show him what it's about
Cool him down with my first four lines, then I start droppin the slay-time rhymes.
Done playin' around with low lyrics and no thought, this battle was over before you even fought
I tear you down until you just another man, little lines n your wordplays bland..

Done brought the kitchen im all the seasonin you need,
I put you outta season like I'm huntin a new breed,
Sneak preview to what? A retard attempting poetry?
Please re-light the flame before attempting to come at me..
Hold your pistol when I fire out bullets from an m-16,
meanest MC you'll come across and I'm still fightin clean.
I've been there done that and beat kids like you,
It ain't even a problem anymore, I'll show you how we do..

Done been the illest because I conquered cancer,
took the white cells and flipped em into an answer
Demonstrated how the universe started and the big bang came,
I went into an asylum and everyone else came out insane.
Spun webs that spiders can't conceive, played games with the devil and tricked him with ease
Just like I'mma stomp out any skill that you thought you possess, you rap like a kid with 47 chromosomes at best
Ain't gonna rest until I showed you it all, just how easy it is to drop the ball, embrace the fall, endless barrage from a verbal warsaw.
I'm done I gotta go finish my cookin, but before you post again, learn to rap, munchkin.