When you needed me

When you needed me

There was a time
When you were feeling down and low
And you came to me
When you had no place else to go

I looked deep inside your eyes
And saw them filled with pain
Your heart was crying out for love
And this I gave to you with all by soul
Building your spirit till you were whole again

Chorus

I gave you love
When your heart cried out to me
When you needed a shoulder you leaned on me
Baby I gave you my all
When you needed me

You searched inside your soul
And found the answer in your heart
Said we belonged together
And for a while your heart was filled with joy
Your eyes sparkled bright and sure

But they clouded once again
When you became insecure about the future
So I painted a bright picture
Colored with love and understanding
Framed with trust and truth

Repeat chorus

Now lately all you do is talk about money and worldly things
And suddenly you need some space to think it all over
And after giving you my all, body and soul
It’s so hard for me to let go
Please tell me girl where did I fail, where did I fail?

Repeat chorus till fade

Not too bad, was this done based on a personal experience? Also just a tip I would make a note on when the chorus ends and the next verse begins just for the first chorus that way we know how many verses the chorus actually is. Thanks for sharing!

No, this was not based on a personal experience. Thanks for the tip regarding the chorus i appreciate it.