Nightmareville

this is the place where the moon dies
this is the town where the sun cries
this is the place where the children run
from the stranger who wants some fun
this is my home called Nightmareville
it sits up there on the lonely hill
come on down to Nightmareville
where the siren sits on the window sill

NIGHTMARE!!!!
a town built on my bad dreams
NIGHTMARE!!!!
where nothing is what it seems
Nightmareville

this is the place where the sky turns red
this is the town where the dead are dead
this is the place where the Zombies play
where they come for a getaway
this is my place called Nightmareville
it sits up there, on the lonely hill
come on into Nightmareville
where the siren lures you in for the kill

NIGHTMARE!!!!
a town built on my bad dreams
NIGHTMARE!!!!
where nothing is what it seems
Nightmareville

this is the place where the scarecrows dance
this is the town where the werewolves prance
this the place where the cripples shout
a messed up town there is no doubt
this my place called Nightmareville
it sits up here on the lonesome hill
listen to the tale of Nightmareville
become the siren embrace the thrill

NIGHTMARE!!!!
built on my bad dreams
NIGHTMARE!!!!
where nothing is what it seems

come on down to Nightmareville.

not too shabby. I like the chorus and it's repition of the 'Nightmare!!'. It can kinda paint a picture in my head of your song. Really cool stuff.