Random Verse

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  1. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said: 04-05-2012 07:46 AM

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    Just a verse I scribbled down in the car the other day. I haven't done anything with it as of yet!

    Why do I feel like I've been here before?
    Leaving my love stretched out of the floor,
    Alone but not afraid, taking what he gave,
    My love shall take the secrets that I whispered to the grave,
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     

  2. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said: 04-07-2012 03:32 PM

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    Good start. Add to it. I think you mean "stretched out ON the floor."
     

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    Katie13 said: 04-12-2012 10:54 AM

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    Thanks, Jim Ha ha, yes, I do mean that - I did it on my phone. Autocorrect's the bane of my life, I swear.
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."