Red

Thread: Red

Tags: death, love
  1. strwbrry said:

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    I want to gouge your eyes out
    Hear you scream and shout
    Oh, how much pleasure you
    Give. My soul doesn't exist.

    Those bloodstained walls
    Remind me of- late night calls
    While playing with a rope
    around my neck.

    My stiffened body lies-
    next to your head.
    Could you please tell me:
    Who's dead?
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    What can I say?I love a poem that RHYMES !!!Sounds like an acid trip I had back in '69,just kidding.Cool image,short and to the point,my kind of writing.Bravo!!!!
     
  3. strwbrry said:

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    Thanks!! I almost forgot that I was subscribed here (not much happening :P)