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  1. Matt6660 said:

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    I'm nothing
    Your nothing
    You Don't need me
    I won't let this be
    The end of me

    You say nothing
    Because I in nothing
    You listen
    To your pathetic self
    While you let me
    Die

    This won't be the end of me
    I won't let this be the end of me
    Because i can't die
    I won't die.

    You think You left
    Me to die
    No
    You did not know
    I was already dead

    You can't save me
    I can't even save my self
    You threw me out
    You shut me out
    But you didn't know
    I was gone

    This won't be the end of me
    I won't let this be the end of me
    Because i can't die
    I won't die

    You can't kill me
    You can't save me
    I never thought it would end like this never knew you would break me down, i


    Still need to finish but let me know what you think
     
  2. Matt6660 said:

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    Are the lyrics good or not?
     
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    corynjam said:

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    I know this is a little late, but I just joined this site so... I like these lyrics, they can be a little monotonous at time and the wording could be improved. In other words, the flow may be a little pushed. Try creating different words that sound or at least resemble the meaning of the other words. Other than that, good job.
     
  4. mrdveed said:

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    quite good much better then what i could do
     
  5. Matt6660 said:

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    Thanks
     
  6. Matt6660 said:

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    this is one of my off he wall lyrics. thanks guys
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Welcome
     
  8. DeShaun said:

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    I like these lyrics. If they were mine I might title them "Think Again!"