Life Debt

I'm thinking a deppressing key like D flat to be sung by a male. I haven't quite thought of a part for backing vocals. I was thinking along the lines of Organ. Elec. Guitar, Bass and Drums


Don't you see the pain you've caused me,
Don't you feel me slipping away,
Don't you hear this all around you,
Whilst knowing that you will pay,

Your actions have determined,
On earth you shall not stay,
Your actions have determined,
your life you have to pay.

I used to think maybe I loved you,
But baby now that's all changed,
I used to maybe I loved you but baby now thats all changed

(enters instrumental)

(Voice comes back in softly)

Your actions have determined,
On earth you shall not stay,
Your actions have determined,
your life you have to pay.

Pain and suffering surround me,
But that's gonna go away
There are dark clouds all around me,
Until my dying day,

Your actions had determined,
On earth you did not stay,
Your actions had determined,
your life you had to pay.

Pretty nice. Dark and "vengeancey"
Could use another verse

Originally Posted by Shant1k

Pretty nice. Dark and "vengeancey"
Could use another verse

Thanks, I wrote it about my hate for my little brother after he has tried to kill me, I'm 15 so it makes writing stuff like this alot easier. I would have added another verse but that in my mind would have made it too long.