Lottery (Short song) Please review!!

I can't believe it
hasn't happened for me
I get no luck at all
but I still play the lottery

And one of these days
we'll be on that plane
with money no worry
just heading for better days

If I won the lottery
I'd take you all away with me
I guess until then we're not in hell
So let's make the most of it
so let's make the most of it

Thanks For The feedback :')
And I Like This Alot :')
Its Got A Lot of Potential,
just Need Expanding :')

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