Review please
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pballa76 said:
05-30-2012 10:33 AM
Review please
open your heart
and look with your eyes
the stars in the sky
are starting to cry
they weep when they see
the way we can be
they know what we don't
that we have a hope
so baby come back
we will make this last
i promise you this
you'll have my last kiss
I know its not easy
But when it gets hard
Just turn your head skyward
And look at the stars
Just know that I see
The very same thing
The stars burning bright
Shining their light
They no longer weep
Cause now they believe
That we a chance
To share that last dance
They're coming alive
as we come alive
together again
the world will spin
A very simple Rhyme Scheme, I know. What do you think?