Dead Eyes

Thread: Dead Eyes

Tags: lyrics review, metal, metal song
  1. Tomatomic said:

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    been a while blah blah blah I don't give a ****!!!!!! here's a new something to rated by you lovely people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    You have seen the change coming over me
    now Iím rotting from the inside out
    you can feel the pain bubbling in my veins
    for more I simply scream and shout

    you've seen it inside of me
    there's no need to lie to me
    I know just what you fear
    afraid of what Iíll become
    keep a hold of the gun
    Iíd never wanna hurt you my dear

    look into my Dead Eyes
    see what's going on inside
    look into my Dead Eyes, baby!
    Look into my Dead Eyes
    gaze into my Dead Eyes
    wait and see just what's coming out!
    Yeah!

    The creature Iíve made, eating my brain
    you struggle to break me free
    but it's not my curse, I say it could be worse
    why can't I see it's killing me

    I simply can not believe
    that you still love me
    no matter what I do you stay put
    sadly Iím all alone
    my mind's not my own
    beware of the Dead Eye look

    stare into my Dead Eyes
    please run for your life
    beware of the Dead Eyes, baby
    look into my Dead Eyes
    gaze into my Dead Eyes
    I cant control it, it's breaking out!

    OH the Dead Eyed
    ****ing monster
    Is a raging
    and controlling
    forcing, his way out
    of ME!!!!!!!!!
    feel the
    hands on your throat
    choke the life out
    of you NOW!!!!!!!
    if you live
    you'll ****ing regret
    letting me live
    living this LIE!!!!!!!!!!!

    Gaze into the Dead Eyes
    Fall into the Dead Eyes
    Drown inside Dead Eyes
    Trapped inside the Dead Eyes
    You are Dead to ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Toasted Wonderbread said:

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    I didn't like "look into my Dead Eyes
    see what's going on inside
    look into my Dead Eyes, baby!
    Look into my Dead Eyes
    gaze into my Dead Eyes" until I read what you did with it at the end. Other than that I think you did an overall good job.
     
  3. Tomatomic said:

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    cheers dude. what put you off with regards to the bit you didn't like
     
  4. Toasted Wonderbread said:

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    I'm not a huge fan of line-to-line repetition that's all.
     
  5. Tomatomic said:

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    thanks for the input mate!