So I wrote a song and i want to know if the lyrics are good

I got one life to live and the question is how am I going to spend it.
One life, that’s all you get…..
Tick tock life is a clock
Every second that goes by
Is a second closer to when you die
Tick tock
The clock is running down
The clock will not turn back
Tick tock
the life you had yesterday is still here today
it not going to change
it not going to go away
Tick tock
I don’t know about you, but I want to live
I want to live my life
I want every moment to be a one that should last forever
Not to fade away in the past just like any other day, just like yesterday
Tick tock
One life, time is ticking down
I look in the mirror and i can see the battle raging with the clock
I am going to live my life
I am going to touch the sky
Maybe even Fall in love Again
Haha I learn from my mistakes
Tick tock
My meter wont take my quarters
My clock is running down.
Tick tock
The sun will set, but just now now
i will live
Tomorrow always comes
i will be ready
even if it doesnt i dont care
i am going to live my life today
Tick tock

It is pretty good, I like the live this day as it was your last theme.

Hi wanted to try: I like this a lot, the metric seems have a lot of rythm, I hope you can make a video with the music, if it is as good as your lyrics, you have a number one, if not, at least you are doing your best, congratulations and keep doing this good job. Enjoy the time of your life, cause life only can be lived once. Saludos desde México.

The lyrics are great, try making sure to have a clear bridge or something that breaks free from the normal trend of the song, this could be the closure to it that makes the song sound whole.