Sans ton amour, je n'ai pas de vie

It's in English but has a French title…figures
I hated this when I first wrote it, but now I like it a little, see what you think
The rhythm works for me

Sans ton Amour, Je n'ai pas de Vie - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2012

[Verse]

Just when I thought all hope was gone,
You took my hand and made me belong,
Like my heart's a puzzle, plain to see,
And your last piece fits perfectly

[Pre-Chorus]

How much I love, you'll never know,
And all the ways I've tried just go to show

[Chorus]

That I love you more than,
I need air, but it's not fair,
You just don't see my like I
Wish you would and, it's just no good,
Cos without you I can't survive

[Verse]

You're my knight in shining armour you're the sexy charmer,
And I fell so far that only you could catch me,
How can this be love when it hurts this much,
Because I miss you, but it's not enough

[Pre-Chorus]

And I admit I miss your sound,
Just your heartbeat, us the only ones around

[Chorus]

Cos I love you more than,
I need air, but it's not fair,
You just don't see my like I
Wish you would and, it's just no good,
Cos without you I can't survive

[Bridge]

And maybe one day in time,
You'll remember me and wish that you were mine,
But for now I guess I'll have to hurt,
Grin and bear the worst,
Until I let you know

[Chorus]

That I love you more than,
I need air, but it's not fair,
You just don't see my like I
Wish you would and, it's just no good,
Cos without you I can't survive

Survive, without you I will die,
If I can’t be in your life,
I just can't believe,
That you and I can never be, no, oh don't you see,
Sans ton amour, je n'ai pas de vie

Good stuff,has it been recorded?If this is something you hate,I'd love to see a song you love.When you see stuff like this posted,I feel like I'm in the right place to post mine.Doug

Thank you I have guitar chords for it and I've started on the melody, but I need a vocalist to sing it before I can record it
Anyway thanks again