"My 9 To Your Mind"

(***) is where the "crew" name would go..

(Verse)
Most don't understand why this emcee is a threat?
I'll put my 9 to your mind to make you intently sweat,
Where Bentley set, the cash leaves b*tches plenty wet,
I made no attempt at entry yet! got boys on sentry set,
Can't be to careful, with so many who hate that creep,
A man ya thinks ya mate! he'd seal ya fate for cheap!
Stray sheep! nines out as i put them straight to sleep,
Talk is cheep! time is money... i won't wait to speak,
No debate! my 9 to your mind i'll make ya obsolete!
Even if given a chance! your fu*king odds are weak!
Trust, my squad are freaks only takes nods from me!
(***)'s loyal, if its jobs ya seek come get wads a week,
Anybody going against us were designed for the grind,
You'll find were inclined...we'll put a 9 to your mind!
Your either behind mine or you can die in ya prime...
The point blank flash will be the only time you shine!

JD

nice. the rhyme schemes are great.. multisyllable rhymes, fragments and internals used to strong effect. the content's not to my taste but it's done well.

Still selling your original verses JD?
(if so, anyone who's into the style and looking to buy could consider contacting JD, this is quite solid)

Originally Posted by _SBU

nice. the rhyme schemes are great.. multisyllable rhymes, fragments and internals used to strong effect. the content's not to my taste but it's done well.

Still selling your original verses JD?
(if so, anyone who's into the style and looking to buy could consider contacting JD, this is quite solid)

Good looking on the feed _SBU means a lot, The topic isn't my thing in all honesty i just like to try all areas of the genre, i prefer real issues as topics, the stuff people can relate to, These are old verses, "We Get Paid" is another that iv completely re-wrote and would sell i guess if someone had use for them... Iv got many more if anyone is interested