friendship bullsh*t

Thread: friendship bullsh*t

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  1. mix'erup's Avatar

    mix'erup said: 06-12-2012 10:29 AM

    Angry friendship bullsh*t

    Friendship is Bullsh*t

    bullsh*t mutha ****a you cant treat a *****
    like dat im sorry if you hate my rap
    all i really want from you si to shut your trap
    your a bad guy you went bad like rye
    before you want to die let me hit your eye
    im a little dysfunctional
    i dont mean to get emotional
    im a crazy demon your wife wonte be more than
    blood and semen
    dont think i cant treat him like that
    im to right
    im out of site
    you get out of my site
    friendship is bull ship all there are
    is haters and lovers
    the only reason i hang is my girl or i would die
    even my girl would only sigh at my funeral
    im the real king of darkness
    im gonna tella how to rock in this party
    eminem only wishes to get to my level
    he think and hes on the brink
    beofer that he is gonna have his boat sink
    and of course you mom likes my horse
    she drives a porsh
    you better close the door i hear the cops
    they dont rock nether do you
    ( throws mic )

    like and **** im gone.....
    Last edited by _SBU; 06-14-2012 at 01:32 PM.
     

  2. JD101 said: 06-13-2012 01:04 PM

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    "eminem only wishes to get to my level" ha ha ha your joking right?

    Keep spittin

    JD
     

  3. _SBU said: 06-14-2012 01:30 PM

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    ..you realise that if eminem's boat does sink now, you're gonna be under suspicion yeah? especially if it's followed by your chart success.
    uh. give your horse a sugar cube from me. unless that was innuendo for something, in which case, dont.

    oh yeah, maybe work on rhyme schemes a bit but your lyrics are quite decent. definitely do keep it up and put more time in.
    can't really see how it'd work on a beat but that's not necessarily a bad thing, maybe I'd have to hear it to get that.
    I like the "friendship/bull.." haters and lovers" .to "funeral" section's content most, by far.
     

  4. Tyler6270 said: 06-16-2012 02:36 AM

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    I like the I'm a little dysfunctional part to the emotional part because it's Tech N9ne's and not yours. I know don't like any of this rap because I don't know where else you took stuff, and there isn't a rhyme scheme at all. Also, when you rap tell what you actually feel don't front, like do you REALLY think you're better than Eminem? If you're sane, then no. So don't say that. Keep practicing, but make it your own, and don't front.