cataclysmic

we stand and watch our time elapse
Our future seems like One big past
What do we do when
we lose so much fate
Nothing more to say
it always seems
Like it ends this way

You see
,but you'll never see
You'll be
,But you'll never be
You see
,but you'll never see
You'll be
,But you'll never be

cataclysmic place,
we must leave this place
Nothing left but dreams of drastic ways fighting my own cause
Nothing left
and I can hardly take it.

You see
,but you'll never see
You'll be
,But you'll never be
You see
,but you'll never see
You'll be
,But you'll never be


Mini guitar solo
Drum solo

This is the finished edited version. Let me know what you think

Verses are good,but........the chorus is GREAT!!!!Solid songwriting my friend.Slam,dunk...........we've got a Winner!

I love the verses, they have a really nice flow to them!!!

Thanks Doug and Jzon! This song is very meaningful and i am glad to hear the feedback.

Ya man you know we've all been there and back. It all happens and we write lyrics and then theres the outcome.

When I read this,I can feel myself walking thru the wreckage,the wasteland,the rubble.I feel like it's in the year the HK's are hunting you down,and looking for John Connor to save your life.But.........that's just me!

Good view on it. Every song on a personal view has different means. The lyrics tel mine.

all great feed back guys thanks for that...

I'm glad you're glad!