im done (edited) copy

This is the re edited copy of I'm done. Comments are very appreciated and if you think something does not fit or needs to be added please let me.know I'm done

Intro solo

You Keep pulling me under to save yourself
But you didn't know I was already broken
Torn up and torn apart
Use me til nothings left
Now try saving yourself
You can't
Your so ****ed up,
Nothing's going to change
I've seen it all before

I'm done
I'm done
I'm done
I'm done

I've seen it all before
It all remains the same
nothing's going to change
Ever going to change

The Pain will remain
and the times will never change
Running from the past,
Always seems to be the answer
Theres nothing left to hide
You already know the answers

I'm done

Solo

I'm done
I'm done
I'm done
I'm done

I've seen it all before
It all remains the same
nothing's ever going to change
Ever going to change

Is it ok

I did some editing on this because I did not like some parts. Let me know what you think

Maybe a rhyme or two may make it more interesting.It's up to you,that's my 2 cents.

Matt6660: Hi! One line I notice has something that I tend to do when I write letters or prose--use the same word twice in the one sentence.
In this line: Now try saving yourself now > "Try saving yourself now" or "Now try saving yourself" is sufficient. IMHO, the line would be better with only one "now." Now, mind you, I have the same problem now. (OK, I'm joking around, but it's true I do this!) Keep on writing!!

Listen to Frankie J. That's good advice!

Thanks frankie i did not notice that till now. Other then that

how does this look now guys?

I'm done