here is the second song i wrote

im a white kid thats never been broke
yet im still no ****ing joke
im underrated, underestimated
youre just in the bathroom constipated
i never sold crack, heroin or meth
but when i rhyme im so dirty i need to take a bath
rap is something im obssesed with for years
now ill make all that faggot rappers go home with tears
lil wayne is considered one of the best alive
imma throw him ouuta plane and see if he can dive
he wont survive
so please dont revive
because nobody wants him to thrive
you shouldnt rhyme about driving fast cars
you should stay home and fix all of your mess bars
i may sometimes say bullshit like playing chess in mars
but i got more ideas than an inventor,i stay in the center
i can be your mentor
when it comes to rap
cause i dont just stay in and ****ing fap
i can murder a gender drink shots with the bartender
when im angry i lose my temper
im made out of steel like bender
you fell there
i stayed in my true place
on top
burned my shoelace
set up shop
**** you if your rap name starts with lil
and made a mill
heres your bill
you dont have skill
you destroyed hip hop
imma wash the floor with you like a mop
back into my subject
ill expload the mic cause its only an object
all of my enemies go in a body bag
i never run out of ammo i got lots of mag

Decent flow.. wording should be polished up in many spots. Pretty good overall.
I'm not a Wayne fan myself but even I know its outrageous to make the accusations you did. I mean you don't really think you're better than him do you? Probably not, and that's cool I get the personal pride aspect of trying to make your emotions strongly felt.. But what works best is short blunt truths. The real thing. Everyone has a mental voice that defines them, all the people you see on the street.. The real thing is connecting to those mental voices

And I am 'shaadow' as well, a moderator on this sub forum. What's up with the name? And as for explicit content we are trying to clean things up a bit, we sprinkle things in (myself in particular) such as f**k and s**t but we are not in incouraging racial or sexist slurs. Just watch that. And drop in the topic rhyming thread