Endure Infinity (Keyword)

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  1. Zakynthos said: 07-11-2012 12:13 PM

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    Frankie Jasmine said: 07-11-2012 08:34 PM

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    I really like the "chorus." (The chorus is great as it is.) For a better "flow" in English . . . I would humbly suggest switching two words:

    From: Yes, it now hurts
    To: Yes, it hurts now . . .

    But either is your choice. Both are correct grammatically.