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Last edited by Zakynthos; 04-20-2020 at 06:32 AM.
Nice
What genre do you have in mind?
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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Whoa. Been there. You express it so very well, the grip of the nightmare abyss of Fiery Dreams. I love the short verses between the "Fiery Dreams" and the somewhat more "awake" thoughts, which also express entrapment or impairment from the experience. Your short verses make a fantastic poetic break from the barbaric Empire where one is held imprisoned by the hellish invisible bindings of nightmares . . . which are all too similar to awakenings.
I wish I knew a word with which to convey my connectedness to your poem, perhaps a foreign word, or even from a language I've never heard before . . . However, the best I can find in English is:
Empathy,
F.J.
Last edited by Frankie Jasmine; 07-21-2012 at 12:33 PM.
Thank you.Did you know that "empathy" is originally a Greek word? (en + pathos)
And you're welcome.
So I did find a foreign word for expression!![]()
No, actually I was unaware of the Greek origin.
Greek & Latin > the magic keys to every language!!