I'm new to the forums and want some input to a song I wrote.... I don't know what to name it either.... So if anything comes to mind please share
I imagine it like acoustic but modern rock/ pop punk ish at some parts
Verse 1
I left the street
Where I walked alone
I made my mistakes
Have nowhere to go
Iv come to an end
Iv stumbled and fell
Ever since then iv been going though hell
And I wish you could see
Every word we spoke still affects me
Every breath I breath
The feeling never leaves
Verse 2
Lost in my thoughts
Lost in my dreams
Iv waited for you
For so long now it seems
(still here I wait)
You left me behind
(still here I wait)
I'm gonna be fine
(Still here I wait)
You tore me to prices and killed me me inside
(I don't care in gonna be fine)
Chorus
All iv learned
in all of my life
Is nobody cares
All the lies they've shared
Just stomp me down
Into the ground
Crush my dreams
Silence my screams
Leave me here to die....
Cause all I ever wanted was to leave
But all I ever got was your grief
Verse 3
No one knows
How I feel inside
Everything's broken
Yet still I don't die
And Iv left
All feeling behind
I have stopped waiting
I no longer cry
And wish you could see
How this affected me.....
Chorus
All iv learned
in all of my life
Is nobody cares
All the lies they've shared
Just stomp me down
Into the ground
Crush my dreams
It's to late for me...
Leave me here to die....
Cause all I ever wanted was to leave
But all I ever got was your grief
Verse
I've become the victimized
The utter truth desensitized
I can't even recall the pain
The living dead tear me apart
Let every thing iv thought depart
And leave me here alone...
Chorus Copy
All iv learned
in all of my life
Is nobody cares
All the lies they've shared
Just stomp me down
Into the ground
Crush my dreams
Silence my screams
Leave me here to die....
Cause all I ever wanted was to leave
But all I ever got was your grief