Surrender

Imagine acoustic and slow...


Verse 1
Everybody's empty
Everybody's fake
I feel I got nothing left
Iv got nothing left to say

So don't leave me here alone now
I don't want to feel the pain
I can't stop thinking about you
Cause you take it all away

You've always been there for me
Your never far away
Your the only one
Who will ever know my pain

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Verse 2
You've been there for me forever
Your always there to numb the pain
You help me through hard times
Never let me fade away

When I'm about to end it
When I can't take life anymore
You come and pick me up
Up off the floor

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Hi Noahaa,
I think the rhymes are good, but my english is not perfect so I should not better judge it.
The thing I really like is the meaning. Whatever you talk about (Love, God or something else..) It's great expression of your feelings.

I like this,even though I lean more towards lyrics that rhyme more.This reminds me of some of my songs(Walking Contridiction,Never Say Never)a kind of desperation that has to be written about or exposed.Heavy stuff,but relatable,all the same.Looking forward to what you have next.@OldSchool,your English is just fine!

It's a good song. My favourite part is the chorus.

I can really relate to these lyrics. I enjoy this very much. It's nice when you read someone else's feelings and it's as if they are your own!

Very nice lyrics man I can relate very well to this one. Keep up the good work.

Jimi I didn't even read your comment, but good decision ^

And Noah this is a good piece everything lyrically is there, nice chorus and beautiful second verse. Props