The Right Words

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Hi Sakynthos, This is a wonderful way to look for the right words using the exact words, you made a great song, and you have a fantastic rhythm, I liked this good brain work.

Much appreciated. (; This was very personal, I wrote it last summer.

Happy I am,For a short;were you saying;I am happy,for a short "time"?Just trying to fully appreciate what you're trying to express.Love the refrain(chorus)and the line,"The vapors evaporate like love used to fade"!Very......poetic,keep it up.You've only just begun,they keep getting better,Bravo!

I corrected it 3 minutes before you commented. ;P (it rhymes) Thank you very much.

My pleasure!

Dear Zakynthos,

"The Right Words" is the first original song written on ATL that caused my physical heart to literally move and hurt. This is a physical reaction to trueness, realness, and beauty (even if painful beauty). It's very similar to getting goosebumps (or gooseflesh) over a singer--a rare and beautiful thing that strikes one (me) so rarely, but so personally. My heart is turning over within my chest.

These are your words in particular which caused this reaction, because the verses spoke for me:

I seek words
But I've heard words are difficult
. . .
Always searching and searching for the right
As if I was going to be judged some time

Happy I am
For a short time
Sad I seem to be
Most of my life

There's no balance between
My feelings, I feel so weak!
And just how it really feels
I forgot what pain is



Thank you, friend . . . for this beautiful song.

I don't know what to say... To think that these words touched you... this is what I was aiming for! I can't thank you enough whatever I say.

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