Hi Sakynthos, This is a wonderful way to look for the right words using the exact words, you made a great song, and you have a fantastic rhythm, I liked this good brain work.
Happy I am,For a short;were you saying;I am happy,for a short "time"?Just trying to fully appreciate what you're trying to express.Love the refrain(chorus)and the line,"The vapors evaporate like love used to fade"!Very......poetic,keep it up.You've only just begun,they keep getting better,Bravo!
"The Right Words" is the first original song written on ATL that caused my physical heart to literally move and hurt. This is a physical reaction to trueness, realness, and beauty (even if painful beauty). It's very similar to getting goosebumps (or gooseflesh) over a singer--a rare and beautiful thing that strikes one (me) so rarely, but so personally. My heart is turning over within my chest.
These are your words in particular which caused this reaction, because the verses spoke forme:
I seek words
But I've heard words are difficult
. . . Always searching and searching for the right As if I was going to be judged some time
Happy I am
For a short time
Sad I seem to be
Most of my life
There's no balance between
My feelings, I feel so weak!
And just how it really feels
I forgot what pain is