Υγροαυταπάτη (Liquid Self-deception)

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Hi Zakynthos, As usual hapens, inspiration decides in wich brain makes it´s nest, congratulations for this idea you developed from a daily incident.
I don´t like to suggest changes to an idea, cause it´s a part of yourself in each poem, but in this case I wonder if you would consider to add
another paragraph at the beggining, where you mention a girl that left you, or that didn´t arrived to an appointment, then the reason of doubt if there are tears or raindrops would be bigger to the reader. Hope you understand my point of view, maybe I´m an incorrigible romantic.
And thanks for posting the words in greek, of course we don´t understand but it´s beautiful and interesting language, Thank you.

Very.......cinematic!That's writing that can convay a mini film,in my head.I was there on your scooter,with you!Wow,that's really good poetry!Remarkable how few words can convey such images!Way to go!

Thank you both. Actually, it's not about a girl. It's all about....a deceptive dilemma. Rain or tears? I thought you would know that the cause of the tears is too much speed and wind, not anything emotional. If you have ridden a motorbike, you will undestand.

I totally understood,no explanation neccessary!But thanks for it anyway.