Alone

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  1. Matt6660 said:

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    I see the world change from gray to black
    Never wanting time to come back
    Iv been here for to long
    I've tried so long
    To Coming back from the end
    But I'm to far gone
    N there's nothing left to save

    I'm just so far gone
    Nothing left to remind
    you of Hell we been there
    Only faint memories of the **** you knew

    Your better of without me
    I'm better of alone

    All that remain are the memories
    Always coming back too haunt you
    Always coming back to stay
    make them go away!

    I still remember, the games you played
    And all the lies, all the pain
    What the ****s wrong
    Leaving me in the dark
    You ****ing knew it All along

    Your better of without me
    I'm better of alone

    All that remain are the memories
    Always coming back too haunt you
    Always coming back to stay
    make them go away!

    Solo

    Your better of without me
    I'm better of alone

    All that remain are the memories
    Always coming back too haunt you
    Always coming back to stay
    make them go away!

    Your better of without me
    I'm better of alone




    Thanks for reading! Let me know what you think.
     
  2. Noahaa said:

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    I thought it was really good... What type of music would you put it to...

    I really like the chorus
    And the first verse...
    There's so much meaning...
    I feel like it could almost fit my life too.... These lyrics really hit close to home for me....

    I think it really shows talent when people write songs that people can connect with...

    Keep writing lyrics I'd love to read more or listen to a recording
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    I play metal. I wrote this lastnight and i am very glad you like it. I will keep writing and keep you posted on my upcoming posts and recordings.
     
  4. Noahaa said:

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    When I was reading it I was actually imagining it as metal/ a really coarse sounding hard rock!! Pm me updates
     
  5. Matt6660 said:

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    Yea that means alot when you read.something and it sounds how the writer is meaning it.
    Last edited by Matt6660; 07-31-2012 at 04:41 PM.
     
  6. Noahaa said:

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    You should take a look at the lyrics i posted a few days ago
     
  7. Noahaa said:

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    It's supossed to be screamed....
     
  8. Matt6660 said:

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    Ok will do.
     
  9. Matt6660 said:

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    Any one else???
     
  10. Matt6660 said:

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    i looked at you lyrics and they are all really good. sorry for the late reply.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I'm here