This is a piece I wrote over the course of the previous week and I would just like to see peoples reactions and advice for how to put it into song. Do I completely scrap it? Or break it up? Or maybe it's a rough outline for a 'suite'.. I have no idea. Long and short of it; help is needed.
Here goes..
Let me tell you about a road. Stretching far out into nowhere, this road is barren and seeded with rocks. Wedged into the soggy dirt, decaying stumps cascade out into the middle of the road and reach for the ankles of passersbys. Too narrow for anything but the feet of men and women, it stretches long, out into the woods. It is stitched between pines and maples. Mixed amongst them are the strong oaks, and occasionally a birch tree will spark mystique in anyone’s journey down this road.
Now imagine that you are indeed walking along this very trail, wandering further and further into nowhere. Worn into the middle of the path are footprints. They dot the road and indicate unmistakable signs of travel. Along the edges of the road lie rusted soda cans, complemented by occasional plastic wrappers or piles of pocket change. Once in a while you come across an old pair of tennis shoes, or a rag, with no evidence of how they got there besides the lonely footprints down the center of the trail.
Snaking through fields where the grass towers all of five feet above the ground, the road seemingly runs forever as it opens up into the mountainous background. Peace for a moment seems inevitable. Though soon, lightning claps above and the rain is not slow to follow. Regret soaks the air, and for the first time, this road seems as though it can only get worse. Debated are thoughts of turning back. Again, your eyes turn to the side of the road, where there lies a pile of bones. They resemble human bones, and you shudder with fear as the hairs on the back of your neck rise.
Look; up ahead lies an opening, but the earth is scorched, and where there once grew trees and bushes, heaps of black now reside. It is at this moment you notice the even greater opening past this one, filled with black ash and stumps symbolizing the headstone for every fallen tree. The heaps of black stretch as far as the eye can see; now your journey down this road seems more like a lost cause, turning back seems to be your only option.
Somewhere back where you came from, there must be a road that opens into the sea, or stumbles into the skirts of mountains. Though, all you do is stand there, sizing up the landscape and looking past what looks like a battleground. You find peace for a moment as the mountain cap rises above the scorched land off in the distance. A second thought arouses perhaps a greater decision. Maybe this road eventually opens up out of the ash, and heads for greater things. You don’t know where it goes, but something in the pit of your stomach tells you that it leads towards a better place. As you listen, you start to hear a tune, a tune which only the stronger man hears on his way down this path, though some follow it to different directions. But you, you are following it into the teeth of the mountains, on to bigger things.
In this world, there are many things that can bring you down, some are simply more powerful than most. No matter how strong you think yourself to be, there are circumstances where you are deemed too “loose” yourself. When one lets this happen and throws all hope into the wind, trouble and therefore consequences are almost uncanny. Though most people don’t know that the adversity in which I’m talking about strengthens the person who is already strong enough to make it through. In the end, your demon becomes your savior, and only the people that have experienced the journey down this trail know this. It is a trechorous privelage.